fic: The Girl Next Door (BSG)

[icedteainthebag]

Title: The Girl Next Door
Author: icedteainthebag
Pairing: Adama/Roslin, Adama/Roslin/Maya
Rating: MA
Word Count: 6,500
Summary She couldn't get enough of freedom.
Notes: Because I can't write short stories I guess, here is 6,000 words of porn. No beta and I wrote it today, so it's probably riddled with errors. Seriously, I corrected a typo wherein Bill was

Comments

[defyingnormalcy]

Seriously, I corrected a typo wherein Bill was sucking his own cock.

*is dead of LOLZ*

Oh Maya, you lucky girl you! And Laura, I always knew you were a kinky bitch. :P

[icedteainthebag]

You know our girl knows how to have a good time! And I mean, who wouldn't, with Maya being as... ahem... smart as she is?

Thanks for reading. :D

[defyingnormalcy]

LOL.

Just wondering, I've read a few fics where Maya was cast as a queer woman (pre-attacks) - was that canon? I can't recall now.

[icedteainthebag]

I think it's really strong fanon--just going over my notes on her with other authors, the Heroes of NC graphic novel (where her relationship with Laura is explored a bit more) and looking at the BSG Wiki I can't find any concrete mention of her sexuality. But for some reason I think it true. Interesting that others have thought the same. :)

[icedteainthebag]

OMG, FINISH YOUR GODS DAMNED STORY, WOMAN.

I am intrigued as to how you can have a MOL without A/R, but I'm with you.

[icedteainthebag]

Frak wishflsinfl. Yeah. All the best writers were drunks, right? DRINK UNTIL IT COMES OUT. YOU CAN DO IT.

No rush on the reading. It'll always be here.

[wishflsinfl]

You've truly outdone yourself, my friend. Seriously. This was so uncomplicated and fun and so frakking hot. It's like the negative image of the whole Bill/Ellen/Laura threesome of complicated strangeness. And I love them both. So much.

hard and to the knuckle.

Guh. As hard as it is to do something original with the who's-doing-what language you always manage to come up with something new. It's like a gift.

Maybe he was jealous now.

Or not. Drunk, high Bill is the best kind.

This quest for validation from the both of them-Maya and Bill-would be a fun game to play if she were into playing games.

I love how easy and fun and un-angsty this all is. Have I mentioned that?

Sometimes... at night... I touch myself thinking about him frakking you.

*dies*

"Now that I've had you, I want her," Bill said. His face broke into an apologetic smile as he looked at Maya. "If you're okay with that." So Bill. I love it. He's all I'm gonna be an alpha male, if that's okay with you Laura

[icedteainthebag]

It's like the negative image of the whole Bill/Ellen/Laura threesome of complicated strangeness.

I just really wanted to write porn where they enjoy themselves. It's been a long time since I've written flat-out sexy times where they weren't all, "BUT HORRIBLE THINGS ARE GOING TO HAPPEN." They deserve that, as Saul would say. I'm glad you loved it so much. :) :) I love that you love how fun and un-angsty it is here.

As hard as it is to do something original with the who's-doing-what language

Yeah, I know. I wish there were some other word for "clit."

So Bill. I love it. He's all I'm gonna be an alpha male, if that's okay with you Laura.

He's like, a total gentleman who's going to get double teamed by two really hot chicks. Gods, my Bill is a total porn star, isn't he? But a sensitive and caring porn star.

And OMG, Bill's seduction of Maya is unbelievably hot and so sweet and tender. He's really the kind of guy who would make this experience a good one for her. He feels good when the ladies feel good. I'm thrilled you liked that

[larsfarm77]

GUH.

I need recovery time.

Seriously.

I loved the wrong tent gag. Perfect. And carefree Laura/Bill/Maya?? ♥

Laura, herself, was so swollen, and wanted him to see her frakking herself for him, but knew he was far too involved in bringing Maya to orgasm to watch her now.

THIS. And then what he looks up to ... *dies*

Laura smiled back. "Well, I like to teach."

"Oh, gods," Bill groaned.

And this was AWESOME. Way too much fun. I gotta believe NC was fun (at times :D).

Yes, that was my super literate feedback. What can I say, I love your porn :).

[icedteainthebag]

I loved the wrong tent gag. Perfect.

I wrote the whole thing, then remembered the baby. Gods damned babies, always getting in the way.

And carefree Laura/Bill/Maya?? ♥

YES. I gotta believe it was fun at times too. They were all smiling and happy down there, you know? Threesomes were probably why.

I love your super literate feedback. It's the best kind. It's a step above a "GUH" or a "HOT DAMN."

[starbuck92]

Dear gods...

[icedteainthebag]

Too much?