fic: The Girl Next Door (BSG)
Title: The Girl Next Door
Author: icedteainthebag
Pairing: Adama/Roslin, Adama/Roslin/Maya
Rating: MA
Word Count: 6,500
Summary She couldn't get enough of freedom.
Notes: Because I can't write short stories I guess, here is 6,000 words of porn. No beta and I wrote it today, so it's probably riddled with errors. Seriously, I corrected a typo wherein Bill was ( Read more... )
Author: icedteainthebag
Pairing: Adama/Roslin, Adama/Roslin/Maya
Rating: MA
Word Count: 6,500
Summary She couldn't get enough of freedom.
Notes: Because I can't write short stories I guess, here is 6,000 words of porn. No beta and I wrote it today, so it's probably riddled with errors. Seriously, I corrected a typo wherein Bill was ( Read more... )
hard and to the knuckle.
Guh. As hard as it is to do something original with the who's-doing-what language you always manage to come up with something new. It's like a gift.
Maybe he was jealous now.
Or not. Drunk, high Bill is the best kind.
This quest for validation from the both of them-Maya and Bill-would be a fun game to play if she were into playing games.
I love how easy and fun and un-angsty this all is. Have I mentioned that?
Sometimes... at night... I touch myself thinking about him frakking you.
*dies*
"Now that I've had you, I want her," Bill said. His face broke into an apologetic smile as he looked at Maya. "If you're okay with that."
So Bill. I love it. He's all I'm gonna be an alpha male, if that's okay with you Laura.
And OMG, Bill's seduction of Maya is unbelievably hot and so sweet and tender. And then when she admits that she's been alone and how much she needed this and they're both so sweet to her. Aw.
Laura grinned. "None for me."
Laura wins everything. EVERYTHING.
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I just really wanted to write porn where they enjoy themselves. It's been a long time since I've written flat-out sexy times where they weren't all, "BUT HORRIBLE THINGS ARE GOING TO HAPPEN." They deserve that, as Saul would say. I'm glad you loved it so much. :) :) I love that you love how fun and un-angsty it is here.
As hard as it is to do something original with the who's-doing-what language
Yeah, I know. I wish there were some other word for "clit."
So Bill. I love it. He's all I'm gonna be an alpha male, if that's okay with you Laura.
He's like, a total gentleman who's going to get double teamed by two really hot chicks. Gods, my Bill is a total porn star, isn't he? But a sensitive and caring porn star.
And OMG, Bill's seduction of Maya is unbelievably hot and so sweet and tender.
He's really the kind of guy who would make this experience a good one for her. He feels good when the ladies feel good. I'm thrilled you liked that part--it is probably my favorite part. Or one of them.
Laura always wins everything. I'm pretty sure when the Book of Pythia came out they removed all the dirty parts about the Dying Leader.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.
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