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dmjewelle August 2 2012, 18:56:26 UTC
I like this story a lot - the descriptions, the nudging connection to the real world, and the last line was a good twist. Thank you for the good read!

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bratfarrar August 3 2012, 19:43:35 UTC
Wow, that went in a totally unexpected but kind of cool direction.

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