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[story] the wind on the sea

Feb 01, 2007 07:46

author: flamebyrd (flamebyrd)
email: flamebyrd [at] gmail.com

( Kai was lost in equations when a slight coolness on his forehead, then around his neck told him he should come back to earth. )

book 01: imaginary beasts, story, author: flamebyrd

Comments 8

tarigwaemir February 2 2007, 03:39:24 UTC

Oh, I like the setup of this world! What with the technomancy and the elementals...I really like the interaction between Kai and Maka as well. (I hope you write more for this universe!)

briar_pipe February 2 2007, 04:18:59 UTC

Oh, hey, you wrote something! And it was really cool!

I love Maka, so cute I want to squeeze him. Can we make a plushy? ^_^. I love the way he looks after Kai, doesn't act like a dim-witted familiar but like a friend. And I love that he defies categorization. Human folklore doesn't know everything.

Loved that the story had suspense and actual plot - I've been reading fic so long I'd almost forgotten what that was. :P

wordsofastory February 3 2007, 00:36:47 UTC

This is a very neat story. I like all the detail that went into the worldbuilding, and what a neat idea for your imaginary beast.

kiyoshi_chan February 3 2007, 05:09:29 UTC

♥!!!

still_ciircee February 4 2007, 03:16:43 UTC

Ooo! I love Maka! He's so...cute! And Kai is awesome. I love how he's powerful, yet just wants to be normal and free. And I love how you handle this world. You give us just enough to not be confused and you don't bog us down in stuff we don't need. Wonderful story!