forgive me please?

Feb 17, 2008 10:53

This took way longer than it should have, especially for something so short. My excuse is that there was more than one, and this is the only one I finished. It was written really late at night, too.

But.
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original fiction, verse: surreality

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ari_raid February 17 2008, 22:54:52 UTC
They.. they.. both need really, really big hugs. HUGE hugs. And then they need their heads knocked together.

But instead, I'll send you virtual hugs. Of love, not because you're angsty. Or addicted to an unknown number of substances. Because they're fantastic and this is absolutely lovely, both in achieving realistic emotion and in terms of language.

FIRST COMMENT YAYZ

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iambickilometer February 17 2008, 23:11:06 UTC
SO DAMN TRUE. XD And then Ilfiid needs to get laid. Relatively soon.

Aw, thanks. XD I am, however, addicted to various substances: keyboard, tea, Hansen's soda, tea, pencil, tea... you get the idea. And thank you.

hate to burst your bubble m'dear but I do not get many comments on original fiction. you will probably be the first of two. still, you can gloat to smoke about it...

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ari_raid February 18 2008, 00:34:08 UTC
Well, yes. Certainly. Equivalent of a hug...?

Well, okay. Tea is an acceptable substance to be addicted to. If I don't have at least two cups a day I don't function. And carrot cake. That's another excusable addiction, it's soooo good~

You're probably addicted to charcoal pencils, too, am I right? xD

I... I beat someone, though, right? Um.. um... *bursts into tears*

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smokexscribbles February 18 2008, 15:26:05 UTC
DAMN YOU, THWARTER OF MY EVIL PLOTS

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smokexscribbles February 18 2008, 15:25:30 UTC
*wibbles* I WANT TO HUG THEM BOTH. AND OH MY GOD. AND D: . AND <3 <3 <3. AND AND AND djkfjdskgjkjgkjkjLOVE.

/incoherent

I'm trying to choose one of them to feel sorry for but it's impossible. Instead I'm wallowing in the beautiful, lovely, mutual angst.

...

*wallows*

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iambickilometer February 18 2008, 18:00:59 UTC
X3 they are a very tragic duo. I am very glad you liked it.

XD

THEY ARE BOTH EVER SO WOEFUL. Wallow away, my dear.

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