forgive me please?

Feb 17, 2008 10:53

This took way longer than it should have, especially for something so short. My excuse is that there was more than one, and this is the only one I finished. It was written really late at night, too.

But.
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original fiction, verse: surreality

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ari_raid February 17 2008, 22:54:52 UTC
They.. they.. both need really, really big hugs. HUGE hugs. And then they need their heads knocked together.

But instead, I'll send you virtual hugs. Of love, not because you're angsty. Or addicted to an unknown number of substances. Because they're fantastic and this is absolutely lovely, both in achieving realistic emotion and in terms of language.

FIRST COMMENT YAYZ

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iambickilometer February 17 2008, 23:11:06 UTC
SO DAMN TRUE. XD And then Ilfiid needs to get laid. Relatively soon.

Aw, thanks. XD I am, however, addicted to various substances: keyboard, tea, Hansen's soda, tea, pencil, tea... you get the idea. And thank you.

hate to burst your bubble m'dear but I do not get many comments on original fiction. you will probably be the first of two. still, you can gloat to smoke about it...

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ari_raid February 18 2008, 00:34:08 UTC
Well, yes. Certainly. Equivalent of a hug...?

Well, okay. Tea is an acceptable substance to be addicted to. If I don't have at least two cups a day I don't function. And carrot cake. That's another excusable addiction, it's soooo good~

You're probably addicted to charcoal pencils, too, am I right? xD

I... I beat someone, though, right? Um.. um... *bursts into tears*

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smokexscribbles February 18 2008, 15:26:05 UTC
DAMN YOU, THWARTER OF MY EVIL PLOTS

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iambickilometer February 18 2008, 18:02:49 UTC
XD true enough.

I agree wholeheartedly. Same. Carrot cake...? [drools] Damn, now I'm hungry.

That too! And fanfiction.

yes, you did. And if you rec my original stuff to other people, you will beat that many more! [/shameless]

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ari_raid February 18 2008, 20:20:20 UTC
I make a kickass carrot cake. That and spaezel are my specialties. All I need to be able to cook to survive xD

Am working on it ASAP patly because of the joy I get from being comment 1 and partly because you're awesome and when you're famous and all I can go, you know what? I totally commented first on her work, and introduced people too it. Bitch, please.

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iambickilometer February 18 2008, 22:08:54 UTC
I think I may have just fallen in love right there. I cannot bake to save my LIFE. Especially even when I have a recipe to follow.

ah hells yeah. :D And that's true. I'll dedicate my first book to you. "This one's for Ariana, who commented first."

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