are you happy where you're sleeping?

Jan 16, 2008 21:53

This is for smokexscribbles, because she wanted Ravix/Ilfiid and hell, so did I.

Title: Shame
Series: Surreality Complex [opodemien et cetera]
Wordcount: 732
Claimer: All characters and settings belong to me.
A/N: Ravix and Ilfiid are a pair of my most-used characters, second only to Taize. They have issues. Ravix is, if you don't get it from the story ( Read more... )

original fiction, verse: surreality

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jasetsi January 17 2008, 09:56:11 UTC
You, my friend, have a reader. Because this is exactly the kind of flangsty stories I like. And the last paragraph is lovely...

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iambickilometer January 17 2008, 16:24:28 UTC
Really? :D Flangst is so much fun. Thanks! it makes me realise how much shit I put Ravix through. 'This time,' he says, and my automatic response is 'yeah, right. In your dreams, Ilfiid.' >.>

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jasetsi January 18 2008, 10:43:29 UTC
I am the same to my characters... I think I torture them just as much as Ohkawa torture hers Also; more stories about these two are mostly welcome -hint-

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iambickilometer January 19 2008, 00:59:23 UTC
Yeah. I can't really complain about what she does to her characters, after my own twists. I mean, at least she doesn't paralyse any of her protagonists in the first chapter. >.> I'll remember that. They'll probably come up more often, as I am really quite fond of them. And all the gang, for that matter. It's nice to know I have an audience.

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cheloya January 17 2008, 13:30:03 UTC
:3 I like. Where can I find more?

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iambickilometer January 17 2008, 16:22:01 UTC
I need to write more first. >.> At some point I'll start working on the story (I started it last year) for this universe again, and as people seem to be interested maybe I'll post some snippets. Or the whole thing, as I seriously doubt that this is publishable material. XD But thanks.

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smokexscribbles January 17 2008, 22:50:40 UTC
): but <3

I want to hug them both to death. I love this - “I always want you here,” he said aloud.

“You’re angry,” Ravix guessed.

“I will be,” Ilfiid corrected. “When I feel better, I’m going to be furious. But I’m not turning you out because of that. You are going to have a shower and change and eat, and then I’ll yell at you.”

because that's exactly how I feel, how I think everyone feels, sometimes. AWESOME JOB <3 *ships*

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iambickilometer January 18 2008, 00:12:10 UTC
:D

Me too. >.> Thanks. Ravix needs some tough love, and someone to tell him an adamant 'no', which Ilfiid is really bad at giving (he's a softie). Ilfiid is better at forgiving.

THANKS. :D I have shippers! Or more accurately, Ravix and Ilfiid have shippers! MY LIFE IS COMPLETE. Well, almost. I've gotta get fanfiction for them. THEN my life will be complete. XD

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smokexscribbles January 18 2008, 00:50:14 UTC
I feel the same way, lol.... "I need someone to write fanfiction about my characters. I don't care if I have a book published (LIES YES I DO) I just want a totally insane fanbase."

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iambickilometer January 18 2008, 00:53:18 UTC
EXACTLY. My dream is to surf LJ or FFN one day and find a community or likewise dedicated to some completely random pairing from my writing. [starry eyes]

Perhaps I'll write you some fanfic. Fred/Zack for the win. XD or Anne/Constance. >.>

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