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yukitsu October 1 2007, 06:38:57 UTC
I like the last one best. Also, how true, Doumeki. It's not that he doesn't like you ! He just hasn't realized there's something else there! XD

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iambickilometer October 1 2007, 21:00:19 UTC
Thanks! Yes! Keep your hopes up, Shizuka!

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xturncoatxiii October 1 2007, 19:40:35 UTC
104!!!

Right anyways, YOU ARE INSANE. Seriously. *has only managed two per month for 31-days*

Even if you didn't really do them for 31-days. *goes to check the October themes*

<3

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iambickilometer October 1 2007, 21:01:18 UTC
Well, I got them all done, at least. Mm, october themes. Will refrain..will refrain...will wait until I get home...

Ah hell. [goes to check]

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heyharvard October 2 2007, 11:21:15 UTC
No, he assumes it’s the free lunch, or the chance to annoy him...

Good point. That particular drabble was just all-one-big good point.

On to the next set. :D

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iambickilometer October 2 2007, 20:04:25 UTC
Watanuki can has too much denial...

Thank you! Glad you approve. :D

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flakedice October 4 2007, 11:46:47 UTC
Synesthaesia
Beautiful comparison of Doumeki to a forest. Very nice and also very apt.

Oblivious
Favouring Watanuki over lunch. Love indeed :)

Knowing
Hmm. Interesting that you have Doumeki waiting for permission. Or did you intend it as Doumeki only making his move after it was obvious to Watanuki that Himawari did not return his feelings?

Making the Most of It
Nice reflective piece. Bittersweet with Watanuki accepting what he can get.

The other One
It looks like everybody's waiting. And for Watanuki to wake up. Though sometimes I don't think he's oblivious rather than purposefully ignoring Doumeki's advances.

Nice batch. Especially with the same theme running through all of them.

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iambickilometer October 4 2007, 15:19:16 UTC
First of all, thank you very much!

As for your question about Knowing, my intention was that Doumeki is trying not to scare Watanuki off by going too quickly. It was also Himawari noticing how things have slightly changed and being grateful for that. If that at all makes sense.

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