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iaculantia

♫FIC - BLACK LICORICE KISS

Sep 23, 2011 03:39

black licorice kiss
1/1 ~ taekey ~ 2687 words
only those who go too far can possibly find out how far one can go
( never look back )

type:au, fandom:kpop, pairing:taekey, rating:r, !fanfic, subject:shinee

Comments 14

iaculantia September 23 2011, 10:40:50 UTC

linnhe even though you deserted me in my time of need ;^;

linnhe September 24 2011, 22:04:38 UTC

WHY ARE YOU BEING MEAN I DIDN'T DESERT YOU I FELL ASLEEP ;A; have a heart woman

Besides, you didn't need me for this, it's absolutely gorgeous

( ... )

l2inl2in September 26 2011, 04:46:36 UTC

Do you know what my favorite part of this fic is?
the fact that re-reading grit for the 30th time and that image of key walking around drunk/hungover and naked with a bottle of booze is where this whole thing came from so I say to you;

THANK YOU MY MUSE YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING OTL

as far as your questions tho... the pants were under her not in her LOL
the party was key's bday party and he was miserable with it cus all of his hipster friends (jongho) are lame and fake. i think somehow onew brought taemin or something idek but i see them having this long term till death do us part kind of best friends for life with benefits kind of trendy relationship. my head is strange.

but the awkward breakfast idea is awesome. not that i'll ever write it but...yeh you know ^^;

also thanks for all your help and sorry i flipped out when you passed out >//>

the_night_thief September 23 2011, 20:52:19 UTC

Holy shit, this. ._.
I mean, is it wrogn that I found Taemin watching Kibum be all naked -- while wearing heels, mind you -- to be incredibly hot?

l2inl2in September 26 2011, 04:47:22 UTC

IT IS NOT WRONG AT ALL!!! That's basically why I wrote it ^^b

thanks for reading and commenting hun <3

killernoona September 26 2011, 01:31:40 UTC

;A;
this
was
so
beautiful
I CAN NOT NFKSNGDSJGDS.

l2inl2in September 26 2011, 04:47:58 UTC

this is a beautiful comment -cuddles forever-
i'm glad you liked it <3
thanks~!

a_life_defiant September 26 2011, 11:51:25 UTC

oooh.....THIS.

Love. so much love for it rn - YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW O_O

♥

l2inl2in September 27 2011, 05:07:02 UTC

this makes me insanely happy thank you so much >.

lustblown September 26 2011, 12:12:25 UTC

JNFLSKDF. Man, I love this. ;A;
I wish there was a continuation lmfaodnfskdf It's really good and like, the characterization draws me in and makes never want to leave. LOL.

A+

l2inl2in September 27 2011, 05:09:08 UTC

Thank you a trillion all love is awesome, now as far as a continuation goes I srsly doubt it just because all my fics are first chapters with no second in sight so...yeh >.>;

i'm really glad the characterization came off well though since it was kind of...idk action driven? sorta? idk i did kind of worry about them actually having characters so that means a lot to me. srsly thank you <3