LJ Idol - week 1: Black Rainbow

[i_love_freddie]

I feel their eyes upon me

Comments

[ragnarok_08]

Just so poignant and heartwrenching - well done!

[d0gs]

Absolutely loved this - the emotion in it is so poignant and raw

[chocolate_frapp]

amazing

[beautyofgrey]

Oof, powerful - especially love your 4th stanza.

[viagra]

My husband experiences this a lot, and it always seems very distressing. I liked this poem; it seems like you're at the same time distressed and resigned, like at a certain point you're just thinking, 'Okay, the world is confusion. Fine.' Maybe the feeling goes in and out, like it does in this poem. Good work :)