LJ Idol - week 1: Black Rainbow

Feb 08, 2022 20:57

I feel their eyes upon me ( Read more... )

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pixiebelle February 10 2022, 20:28:08 UTC
Very well written ❤️

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marlawentmad February 13 2022, 02:17:01 UTC
This poem has a sliding emotionality. It makes me think of some things that Esmé Weijun Wang wrote about in her essay collection, “The Collected Schizophrenias.”

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static_abyss February 13 2022, 18:16:58 UTC
Love the poem. Especially the ending.

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murielle February 14 2022, 00:04:58 UTC
Yes! To all of it except the spiders, please. ;-)

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alycewilson February 14 2022, 00:15:30 UTC
A vivid depiction of paranoia. Hopefully, it's not something you experience.

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