LJ Idol Week 11 Part 2: If the Creek Don't Rise

Jan 21, 2020 00:47

I watch the river ( Read more... )

poetry, ljidol

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kittenboo January 21 2020, 02:22:06 UTC
This is beautiful

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i_love_freddie January 24 2020, 17:57:19 UTC
Thank you!

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ragnarok_08 January 21 2020, 04:21:37 UTC
Lovely <3

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i_love_freddie January 24 2020, 17:57:46 UTC
Thank you :)

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alexanderscttb January 23 2020, 17:13:47 UTC
These are great couplets, each strong and imagistic and emotive.
I'm wondering what would happen if the deepest horrors were discovered. . .

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i_love_freddie January 24 2020, 18:00:58 UTC
That's what I was wondering when I wrote this. Some things are meant to stay hidden IMO!

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adoptedwriter January 24 2020, 14:29:22 UTC

Great imagery!

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i_love_freddie January 24 2020, 18:01:41 UTC
Thank you!

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nikkiii_brown January 24 2020, 17:55:42 UTC
Oh I love this!

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