Fic: Around the Corner

Jul 22, 2009 14:22

She chuckled slightly at the sour expression on his face and threw an apologetic hand in the air.  "Your words, not mine, remember?  But you were right.  We've both been guilty of losing sight of that, but not anymore.  This fleet comes first.  Before me.  Before you.  And before Kara.”

“Yes, the fleet comes first,” he agreed, though he wasn’t ( Read more... )

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i_am_davnee July 22 2009, 23:53:05 UTC
Thank you! And OMG your icon. So much love!!!

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i_am_davnee July 24 2009, 02:18:42 UTC
Awesome! Thanks! :)

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missbevcrusher July 23 2009, 00:01:22 UTC
I absolutely loved this. Loved this angle and for me, it fits. Just wow...

She sighed before continuing. "I am afraid my death will be meaningless, that everything I am fighting so hard for right now is a prelude to nothing. I can't continue to pretend that I don't have doubts. Just like you can't continue to pretend that I'm not dying."

This... this was just... Man, it fit. And I loved, loved these lines of dialogue.

I'm so glad you finally decided to finish this one. Any more gems hidden on that computer of yours? lol

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i_am_davnee July 23 2009, 00:31:04 UTC
Thanks! It means a lot to me that you found this believable. And I'll have to check that hard drive again for lost fics wanting to see the light of day. :)

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missbevcrusher July 23 2009, 01:40:53 UTC
*points @ icon* That is my reaction to the possibility of new fic from you. :D

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i_am_davnee July 23 2009, 01:58:29 UTC
LOL! You are so good for my ego. :D

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snoopy0917 July 23 2009, 00:04:47 UTC
OMG.

Ok first of all...OMG you didn't tell me you were writing!!!

Second of all...OMG this is fabulous. I adore this. I love reading your take on the living situation. And the little beats and notes you hit in here. Oh, it's just incredible. I love how you tie it all together. I really do.

If you'll excuse me, I'm just going to go sit over here and be stunned...

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i_am_davnee July 23 2009, 00:34:09 UTC
*offers smelling salts*

Well I like to keep you on your toes. What's life without surprises? ;)

Thank you for the fabulous feedback. It makes me so happy that you love this and find it plausible. It's a sadfic, but hopefully still worth the read.

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cely July 23 2009, 02:48:45 UTC
That was lovely. And although I always figured she did move to guest quarters, I always wondered exactly when that happened. I think I'll take this fic as my own personal cannon.

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i_am_davnee July 23 2009, 03:22:59 UTC
Oooh, thank you! Getting someone to think of something I've written as their personal canon is about as high praise as it gets! I'm glad this fic moved you that way.

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danceswithcows1 July 23 2009, 03:08:03 UTC
Can my stay in Denialand extend to all of season 4?

Completely valid, if painful, explanation for the switch in living arrangements. If I think hard enough on it, I would think the switch happened sometime after Escape Velocity, but it's summer and I refuse to use more than 33% of my brain cells. Yours fits better with what was going on personally.

I don't think I've read anything of yours that didn't fall into character. Go girl!

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i_am_davnee July 23 2009, 03:25:18 UTC
Sorry to have caused pain, but I appreciate that you considered this in character.

And I endorse your summer 33% protocol. I'm familiar with it myself! ;)

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