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i_am_davnee

Fic: Shell Shocked

Jun 27, 2009 14:42

Title: Shell Shocked
Author: Davnee
Rating: MA
Pairing: Laura/Sam
Summary: It's a lifetime until tomorrow. Spoilers through Exodus.
Prompts: Again; Still alive
A/N: So the bsg_pornbattle gave me the perfect excuse to write a sequel to War Crimes, where I first paired up Laura and Sam. I cover a lot of the same territory in this fic but, eh, I was just looking for a ( Read more... )

fanfic, bsg, roslin

Comments 33

sleepismyfriend June 27 2009, 20:38:32 UTC

This is absolutely crazy how well I actually dig this pairing. Sam's sweetness is very Sam. He gives what she needs when she needs it, and pulls back when she doesn't.

*grins* Amazing job!

i_am_davnee June 27 2009, 23:58:34 UTC

Thanks! I've really fallen in love with Sam after writing these two fics. I'd have never thought it possible, but I just love him with Laura.

peelthelabel June 27 2009, 20:42:12 UTC

all hail mother of porn. I shall pray for you always and FRAK ME THIS WAS !!!!!!!!!!!.

i_am_davnee June 27 2009, 23:59:33 UTC

Thanks!!! I can always use smutly good prayers. :)

missbevcrusher June 27 2009, 20:42:31 UTC

Dude! You wrote another one! And gah! I have to leave right now. But I WILL read this asap tonight. I know this will be awesome. It's a certainty.

Now I can't wait to get back. ;-)

i_am_davnee June 28 2009, 00:00:34 UTC

I see from below that you're back. Hope you didn't suffer too much having to wait! ;P

missbevcrusher June 28 2009, 00:04:18 UTC

Oh it was agony. I had the shakes and everything. LOL

icedteainthebag June 27 2009, 21:08:31 UTC

You've made me a total hoar for Sam/Laura now. You realize that? They're so delicious together. And so tragic.

Sam is so sweet... Gods, he's so nurturing, and I never really felt affectionate for him before, but I do now. Damn it, you and tjonesy making me have soft spots for these macho characters today. What the frak.

Moving on, Oh, let me stop talking about how lovely and sensitive and sad this story was and get to the whole, OMFG, THIS IS THE HOT part.

HOT HOT HOT, hello, frak yes.

Pumping his fingers deep inside her now, he continued to circle her clit with his thumb, alternating his rhythm and how and where he touched her, sometimes grinding his whole palm against her, keeping her off guard, making her wild with anticipation for what might come next.

This pretty much made my day right here. Mmmmm, yum.

She grabbed the sides of the table to anchor herself when she realized that he was going to frak her hard and fast, pounding into her from the moment he first hit bottom. That was fine by her, the harder the better. Each sharp ( ... )

i_am_davnee June 28 2009, 00:03:30 UTC

Thanks for the awesome feedback!

You've made me a total hoar for Sam/Laura now.

Oh gods, I've made myself a total hoar for this pairing too. It's crazy, but I completely love them now. Sucks that there really isn't much more to do with them.

*hazzing a porn sad now*

missbevcrusher June 27 2009, 23:22:13 UTC

Wow... where do I begin?

First, thank you soooooo much for writing this fic. I absolutely fell in love with this pairing with your last fic and to see a company piece to it... well I had to keep from squealing because I was at my parents' earlier.

Now to the parts that absolutely blew me away...

The light in the tent was dim and cold, washed out like this planet she hoped to never see again after tomorrow. Her skin itched with excitement, a counterpoint to the bruises that had already begun to ache. Adrenaline. She’d cheated death again. Sooner or later she’d run out of lives, but she hoped it would not be until her people were safely delivered from this place. She would have never thought the harsh vacuum of space could be a comfort, but she longed to be back among the stars. Hard ground beneath your feet means nothing if it is hollow.Everything about your opening paragraph was perfection imo. The series of words you chose was just... guh... Your ability to come up with these amazing sentences, so easy to read, yet so ( ... )

missbevcrusher June 27 2009, 23:36:00 UTC

He pushed her pants and underwear down to her thighs and then cupped her ass, squeezing it lightly, punctuating that force with a tug of his teeth on her earlobe that drew a soft moan from her lips. Steadying her hip with one hand, he reached back around to stroke her again, trailing his fingers up and down through her folds, drawing slowly collapsing circles around her clit each time he started down again.

The imagerie here was not only vivid but insanely hot. Writing sex scenes that don't read like instruction manuals is not an easy thing to do. But you write smut perfectly and you make it seem effortless. Seriously, I'm not bull-shitting you.

Now to the story itself, Laura/Sam *sigh* who would have thought that this pairing could work and work well. You've turned me into a real fan of this pairing ( ... )

i_am_davnee June 28 2009, 00:07:22 UTC

Thank you so much for the amazing feedback. It really is appreciated. Very much so. And this fic kinda broke my heart for the exact same reason. I'm really loving this pairing now too, and I hate myself for kind of foreclosing it from further exploration. But who knows. Maybe I can figure out a way to do more. :)

missbevcrusher June 28 2009, 00:08:57 UTC

But who knows. Maybe I can figure out a way to do more. :)

What if I dare you to? There must be some way to get them to reunite briefly at some point. ;-)

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