LJ Idol, Season 10 Week 19: Invitation

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[beeker121]

The party/ritual at the beginning is nicely sketched in, and it's a known truth that the folks you want to see naked are rarely the ones who are naked.

I liked your Puck, though reading the rose petals as a gift was a stretch. That's why fairies win, they're big cheaters.

[i_17bingo]

Fairies are the worst.

[marlawentmad]

I love the irreverence sidled up next to formalities.

[i_17bingo]

That's where I like to hang out.

[encrefloue]

Oh the fae--such creatures of duality! Really enjoyed this entry, and was excited to get a glimpse at a potential future story arc!

[i_17bingo]

Definitely for sure I'd like to pit Rafaela against more fairies. I had no idea how fun they were.

[lolaslaughter]

I fall more and more in love with Rafaela every time I get a glimpse into her world!! I would have gone with Titania too, but I don't know if it would have been easy for me to leave (though I do also keep at least one knife on me at all times. 😁) Birds with butterfly wings?!? ❤️❤️ I am glad she got out though!! I can't wait for the next peek into her amazing life!! ❤️❤️

[i_17bingo]

How easy it would be for me to leave would depend on what they're offering. Because they don't have high-speed Internet, and that would be tough to give up.

[murielle]

Titania always had her issues. Rafaela is well away from her. But I wonder, what will the energy bar do to the fairy's constitution? Kind of like a cuisinart on speed, me thinks. ;-)

Kudos! Great story,

[i_17bingo]

I don't think she's going to eat the protein bar. I think she's more attracted to the wrapper than anything.

[murielle]

LOL! Like a kid with the box the toy came in. ;-)