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favoritebean May 28 2017, 07:24:06 UTC
Well, that party turned sour rather quickly. I have to laugh that Rafaela was able to get out of that so easily, but I'm surprised that Titania didn't notice that she was wielding iron.

Nicely written!

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i_17bingo May 28 2017, 11:39:11 UTC
I don't think she noticed because she was so wrapped up in luring Rafaela into her trap. That's not going to happen again.

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halfshellvenus May 29 2017, 07:09:13 UTC
What would Titanian do with a protein bar other than eat it? Though they are pretty nasty...

I always love how unfazed by adversity Rafaela is. "You're trapped in the fairy kingdom because we tricked you after all!" "Hmmm... not. Gotta run!"

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i_17bingo May 29 2017, 18:16:56 UTC
I think that's one of my favorite things about her--she's so solutions-oriented.

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lordrexfear May 29 2017, 23:58:29 UTC
I guess I'm the only person who doesn't like Rafaela and wanted her to be stuck in fairly land? She seems like a stuck up boring little moody annoying wallflower who deserves no friends and whatever happens between her and Noah? She deserves it.

BTW, me even saying this means you wrote something fun. I just read characters differently then most I guess.

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dmousey May 30 2017, 02:49:25 UTC
Raphaela and her adventerous spirit! (Shaking my head) one day she will meet her match- may it be long in coming. Hugsand peace~~~

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i_17bingo May 30 2017, 13:07:03 UTC
It may be sooner than you think. I've been working on non-Idol stories where I've written her into corners I'm having a hard time writing her out of. Her adventurous spirit is going to be the death of me.

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eternal_ot May 30 2017, 07:42:01 UTC
Lol..I never knew a protein bar had so much energy to release someone :D I hope she picked the mirror on the way out. A nice adventure, I am glad she took this one. A great read again.

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i_17bingo May 30 2017, 13:05:05 UTC
In her eagerness to get out she completely forgot about the mirror. But now she feels dumb.

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