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kschlotwrites May 25 2017, 13:07:02 UTC

She's lucky she got to leave!

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i_17bingo May 26 2017, 15:23:44 UTC
Yeah, those fairies are assholes.

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penpusher May 26 2017, 21:16:15 UTC
Thank goodness for carry around snacks! But yeah. that was bullshit. Hopefully Titania didn't unwrap it before she ate it!

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i_17bingo May 27 2017, 12:51:13 UTC
I don't get the impression that Titania is going to eat it--more like worship it.

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banana_galaxy May 26 2017, 22:56:27 UTC
Nasty fairy kingdom! I thought it was cool how Rafaela could see the queen when no one else could.

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i_17bingo May 27 2017, 12:50:16 UTC
I didn't want Rafaela's ability to see Titania to be some mutant ability like magic in Harry Potter, but rather something that could be learned by anybody (though to be fair, her upbringing gave her an unfair advantage). I hope that came across.

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banana_galaxy May 27 2017, 14:31:43 UTC
Yeah, it did. :)

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bleodswean May 27 2017, 19:46:04 UTC
Hahahaha! Very, very witty and your wittiness is so much fun! Even if she's not conscious of it, your girl is so capable! So many great exchanges here, but I particularly enjoyed Rafaela explaining why she doesn't dance.

I also liked the visual of "hostile god".

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i_17bingo May 28 2017, 00:36:59 UTC
Rafaela is pretty capable. She's faced down enough supernatural threats that you think she would have figured out she's capable, but deep down inside she's just an awkward teenager.

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rayaso May 27 2017, 23:18:36 UTC
Wonderful, and so imaginative. I loved the ending! The details and descriptions were great, and it had such a light tone. Very good!

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i_17bingo May 28 2017, 00:34:55 UTC
It took a long time for me to think of something that would be of equal value to a fairy.

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