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i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Season 10 Week 14: Campfire Stories

Apr 06, 2017 16:06

( Gather Round and I'll Tell You a Chilling Tale )

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penpusher April 6 2017, 20:15:46 UTC

What a really great tale, and the narrator being the only voice definitely helped sell the story. Absolutely, 100 percent!

i_17bingo April 6 2017, 20:57:17 UTC

Yeah, I'd considered adding dialogue, but I decided it was better this way.

d0gs April 6 2017, 22:08:24 UTC

i love the story and how you wrote this with the one narrator as well. it's really alive and atmospheric. i read it twice :D

i_17bingo April 6 2017, 22:43:06 UTC

That's more times than I read it.

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i_17bingo April 10 2017, 17:26:46 UTC

Murderers in clown masks will do that to people. Thanks!

rayaso April 10 2017, 22:36:28 UTC

I loved this, with all the interruptions spread through a fun horror story! The interruptions cracked me up.

i_17bingo April 11 2017, 00:38:07 UTC

It didn't used to have interruptions--I threw those in on a lark. I'm relieved they worked.

halfshellvenus April 11 2017, 00:19:16 UTC

I love the implied obnoxious audience in this story, with all of the butting in and naysaying.

“No, Mark, I don't think Santa Claus is a tulpa. No, I don't know why.
Hahaha! Though from the way this story goes, even if he were... he'd never be able to leave the enchanted patch of land.

Once again Rafaela sayves the day! And I think Eric probably really is a coward...

i_17bingo April 11 2017, 00:35:55 UTC

Eric is most definitely a coward.