Prompt #4: Insides

Feb 05, 2010 21:45

Title: Super Star
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Insides
Word Count: 468
Rating: PG
Summary: Insanity or the desire to be known. You be the judge.
Author's Notes: Am I trying to say that South Korean entertainers are insane? Yeah, I dunno. Maybe.

A show like none he’s done before, that’s what he’s planning, that’s what he’s marketing. )

shining shinee, jongkey, fanfiction

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blingasaurus February 6 2010, 02:52:22 UTC
I WAS INTUITIVE FOR ONCE AND I ACTUALLY KNEW WHAT THIS WAS BEFORE I GOT TO THE END. LIKE, I KNEW WHAT WAS GOING ON. HAHAHAHAHA.

i'm much too proud of myself for this. anyways, once again this is really well done. i like the whole ~metaphor~ with the stardom and the whatnot but i can't help wondering wtf jjong's train of thought was throughout this whole thing lmfao. but it's jjong, so it doesn't surprise me.

the creepy continues!!! i can only imagine what's gonna happen when you get into the later prompts ♥

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hyungwhore February 6 2010, 03:13:48 UTC
THIS ACTUALLY MAKES ME SAD. I'M SLIPPING. CLEARLY. IT'S NOT ENIGMATIC ENOUGH. FML

Dude. I didn't even think about that ~*~metaphor~*~ until I had this all copied into this entry and what not. Sighs. Apparently my subconscious is fucking brilliant, because I just thought this was a fic about Kibum being ~*~crazy~*~. I have no clue what Jonghyun was thinking, maybe I'll mix things up and write something from his perspective one of these prompts.

I can't help it ok!! I love creepy. It's so good. rofl Sighs. I'll try something different I swear. yeah right but w/e

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xxqod February 6 2010, 08:40:32 UTC
OMG.
Why does Jonghyun let him do that?!
Like, I'm sure he knew what Kibum wanted to obtain with this and what he would do.
I'm glad Jonghyun panicked and called the police but, still.
OMG.
Almost like Jonghyun wanted him to land in a ward. But that would be reasonable if he knew Kibum was suicidal...
This one's less abstract than the others XD
But I don't know if I really follow this one XD ROFL.

And of course I take time to comment on stories I like! :O
It would be rude to not comment on such awesome!!
<3 ~~

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hyungwhore February 7 2010, 08:16:01 UTC
In my mind, Jonghyun knew some things about Kibum's plan, but didn't know anything like the whole picture. But like blingasaurus said, though, I think that a lot of the actual meaning behind this is a ~*~metaphor~*~ for the Kpop industry on the whole. Like, the shit that they put themselves through just to get people to notice them. It's sort of like slitting your wrists on live webcam. lmfao

It's also something that actually happened in Japan. The girl wasn't hospitalized though, like, in a ward. she jumped off her balcony on live cam like a couple months later.

I'm really glad for that!! I feel like some people don't feel that way. ^^

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prickilla February 9 2010, 11:35:55 UTC
:O:O
what is this ;__; spillage of blood ~ >:(
YOUR METAPHOR THING WAS GENIUS
i didnt really get what you meant in the authors note until the blood was spilling and Fight through it. Be a star. Give his fans the show they want.
OKAY. read the comments down there ;__; your subconscious is genius? :D

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hyungwhore February 10 2010, 02:23:15 UTC
lmfao I'm glad you liked it!! Like I keep saying, I so didn't mean for this to turn into what it did, but I guess sometimes the best things are accidents? Like wine or something? idk

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