Comments | hyacinthian: FIC::Torchwood::ever (happily) after (but a little jumbled in the middle) (Tosh/Owen); PG-13

hyacinthian

FIC::Torchwood::ever (happily) after (but a little jumbled in the middle) (Tosh/Owen); PG-13

Sep 07, 2008 23:41

Title: ever (happily) after (but a little jumbled in the middle)
Author: hyacinthian
Rating: PG-13
Author's Note: I got so tired of Tosh/Owen angst. They deserve a happy ending. Anyway, AU, I guess. It's assuming that Owen's Weevil thing saved him from dying, and that Tosh got put in cryostasis. So there's that. Also unbetaed, so blame me for everything.
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fic: mine, otp: tosh x owen, tv: torchwood

Comments 19

irradiatedsoup September 8 2008, 06:23:29 UTC

Love it. ♥

hyacinthian September 8 2008, 12:48:38 UTC

Thank you! :D

ninamazing September 8 2008, 08:37:03 UTC

Aw, YAY. I am SUCH a fan of this. My inner Tosh/Owen, so abused by two years of Torchwood with other scoffing fans, is finally learning to sing. I loved the New Year's Eve thing you did with the clock times. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

hyacinthian September 8 2008, 12:50:01 UTC

HEE, I'm so glad you liked it! You know, I don't understand why Tosh/Owen is always considered a "bad" relationship and "abusive" when Jack/Ianto isn't. Honestly, fundamentally, I think the structure of both is the same, with Owen being more oblivious than Jack.

BUT I digress. Thank you! :D

fififolle September 8 2008, 10:51:36 UTC

Wow. Wow. Wow.
Thank you. Sincerely, I was enthralled by this. At this point I copied a line to share here - "No," he says. "You're not." His jaw clenches. because it was fab and all the unspoken emotion of it was brilliant, and frankly from then on almost every other line was a cut-and-paster. Lovely writing.
The way he was angry for not telling him she was shot, I have wanted to see a fic like this for a long time :) They were both wonderfully in character. A bother, LOL.
The timed New Years make-up was genius. Well done!
And the proposals were perfect - so them. So real.
And yay for happy endings!!!!
THANK YOU.

edit: OH! and the curtains!! The curtains *laughs* :D

hyacinthian September 8 2008, 12:51:00 UTC

Aw, thank you. :D

And definitely yay for happy endings. They certainly deserve one, LOL!

fififolle September 8 2008, 12:55:36 UTC

You are most welcome!
*adds happy story to memories*

hyacinthian September 9 2008, 01:47:27 UTC

YAY, THANK YOU.

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hyacinthian September 8 2008, 21:16:54 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I know we're friends and I don't comment on your journal much, but I just wanted to let you know I'm totes reading it.

kallie_kat September 9 2008, 02:45:25 UTC

Awwww...that's the happy ending they always deserved. Well done!

hyacinthian September 9 2008, 02:47:39 UTC

Aw, thank you! :D