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hwango

LJIdol 3 Strikes - Week 2 - What Really Matters

Feb 21, 2022 00:49

Sunrise. The faint morning light illuminates the shiny green leaves of a field of coffee plants. Stock audio clips of twittering birds play in the background. All is peaceful. Then, a terrible streak of flame across the sky. Dramatic music swells as the mysterious object from space plummets through the sky and crashes into the field with a ( Read more... )

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Comments 26

bleodswean February 21 2022, 17:07:56 UTC

I will give you a moment to don your Gorton's fisherman rain gear because I'm going to slobber all over you. That's the extent of my ability to form words that exclaim how brilliant this piece of thought-writing is. *slobbers* Brilliant.

hwango February 22 2022, 01:39:14 UTC

I am so pleased! I spent a lot of time on this questioning how it would be received and whether I should try to come up with another idea, and it's a huge relief to have someone react to it positively. Thanks!

roina_arwen February 21 2022, 18:11:56 UTC

This was so much fun! Great job!

This comment has been approved by the makers of Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee.

hwango February 22 2022, 01:41:20 UTC

Hahaha, I'm glad you enjoyed it and that your opinions are also approved by Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee. = )

beautyofgrey February 22 2022, 03:36:07 UTC

I love it! Please send me four crates of Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee. (ASAP, please, I understand there is some sort of climate crises that must be addressed, and I do not want to be late for my quadrathlon!)

Seriously, this was such a fun read- thank you!

hwango February 23 2022, 02:53:02 UTC

One crate per...thlon?...seems about right. I can't imagine competing in a grueling multi-stage sportsing event without an adequate supply of Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee. = ) Glad you enjoyed it!

adoptedwriter February 22 2022, 16:26:08 UTC

This was awesome! Love the characters’ names.

hwango February 23 2022, 02:54:52 UTC

Thanks! I thought about maybe naming that third character, but I didn't think I could come up with anything that would be on par with the othe two. = )

engarian February 22 2022, 16:53:49 UTC

This is excellent and very visual. A perfect statement on advertising and how it can take over a life. I'm suddenly very grateful that I don't drink coffee at all, and stay away from caffeine completely. LOL

- Erulisse (one L)

hwango February 23 2022, 02:58:23 UTC

Don't tell anyone, but...I don't drink coffee either. But if I did, I would absolutely drink Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee.