Comments | hutchynstarsk: Pros: Pyro and Ice

hutchynstarsk

Pros: Pyro and Ice

Jan 26, 2012 23:22

1850 words

With thanks to anna060957 for the beta help. All errors are my own.

Note: This is an AU.

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etain_antrim January 30 2012, 20:09:02 UTC

Oh I like this, and really like how you've incorporated the fandom oversimplification of the lad's personalities. Fire and Ice, and canny Cowley pulling strings...

hutchynstarsk January 31 2012, 14:08:54 UTC

Thanks so much!! :)
I think it could be written the other way (Bodie has smoldering fire, Doyle has chilly ice), but I preferred this way...most of all because *there's no lovely, available picture with Bodie playing with fire.* :D :D
(Yes, that's what inspired this fic!) :D
Thanks for commenting. ^^

anna060957 February 16 2012, 18:32:08 UTC

Well done - another success!

hutchynstarsk February 16 2012, 22:25:42 UTC

Thank you! And thanks for your help. <3

That's a great Fierce Bodie icon!! :)

anna060957 February 17 2012, 19:47:42 UTC

I was going for mean and dangerous!

moth2fic March 15 2012, 17:47:36 UTC

I enjoyed that very much. Thank you! I love the idea of a CI5 with 'hidden' talents, and the idea of Doyle and Bodie complementing each other in that way was great. Now we need some adventures in this AU and of course some hints about the talents of some of the other agents. You did want to create an epic series, didn't you? *g*

hutchynstarsk March 15 2012, 21:23:11 UTC

Ah, thanks so much for this comment! :D I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. ^___^

I honestly thought this would be a big epic story when I started it; I figured it would end up being my Big Bang story because it was simply too huge to write for anything else.

But when I started writing, it seemed like the story ended here. I'm not sure why. :) I *would* like to write more about them and their adventures, but only if I can think of something good and have the inspiration for it. :)

Suggestions are welcome, of course, though I can't promise I'll be able to write them. :)

moth2fic March 15 2012, 21:49:07 UTC

I suppose it needs episode-type fic, with the villains having talents of their own which they've used for bad instead of good. Perhaps burning warehouses that cover up drug or gun running, or corpses turning up in commerical freezers. They'd be ideal for that kind of investigation and the fights would be spectacular.

hutchynstarsk March 22 2012, 18:47:35 UTC

What a great idea! :D Thanks~! I don't know if I'll write it; episode fic isn't the easiest for me. But I totally love this idea and maybe I'll be able to do something with it. :D (And if you want to use it, that's cool too! :D)

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