The Answer Is You (Part Five)

[hunters_retreat]

Title. The Answer is You
Author. hunters_retreat
Artist. selu
Characters. Don, Charlie, Megan, David, Colby, Larry, Alan
Pairings. Don/Charlie, mentions of Larry/Megan
Word Count.25,000
Genre. Slash
Rating. R
Warnings. dub-con, violence
Summary.Charlie Eppes is the best selling author of The Attraction Equation, a book that make finding the perfect partner a

Comments

[sky_49]

That was absolutely brilliant. Loved it from the beginning to the end.

I think there was a typo though. In the first chapter, it was Terry and Robin that died. Then in chapter two, Don said Terry and Kim were dead. Later, the kidnapper reveals that he had killed Kim and Don was surprised. That was a bit confusing for me. I thought I’ll let you know.

Anyways, I still loved it.

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you for the catch! fixing it now!

Glad you enjoyed it!

[lives_to_learn]

That was awesome! Couldn't have been better and I hope there is more to come!

Thanks for the post.

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! It was a lot of fun to write! Glad you enjoyed it!

[devon99]

Yay!! This was great sweetie:) You did an awesome job, as I knew you would. It had an old school feel to it, season one/two, which were my favourite, and you know Im a sucker for protective Don so it hit all my buttons big time.

My only complaint is that it isnt long enough!! It just feels like a start and I want to read more about their burgeoning relationship away from the cell.

LOVED IT.

*hugs*

[hunters_retreat]

*hugs back* thank you for all your support! You were the one that really helped me push through and finish this! I'm so glad you liked it!

tee hee hee... I thought about continuing the fic, but I felt it was good to leave it with the hopeful note. They have a lot to push through, with therapy and the trial that would come after, and as much as I want to write their happily ever after, I didn't think I could do it justice right now. That doesn't mean this won't get revisited eventually though. You know me :P

[ravelqueen]

this was...wow, I mean you took one of the most crack/author insert scenarios out there (the putting them into a room so they get it on already, including "Die for our ship" ^o^) and made it into an honest, visceral frigging haunting and captivating story.

The way it developed and how both of them reacted to it was gripping and the way michaelis manipulated them and raped them in a very real, if not physical, sense was oppressive in a wonderful way.

I also really liked the ending, in that you really showed what a situation like that would do to someone and that you acknowledged that whatever feelings were there before they had to be confronted after working through the layer of compulsions on them through the kidnapping.

I just applaud you for this wonderful fic!^^

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! While I am a sucker for the happily ever after ending, I didn't want to end that this way. I wanted the hope for it, of course, but there was so much that happened to them and it would take a long time for either of them to be able to look at each other in anything close to a healthy way, let alone explore the sexual dynamic that was between them before it all happened.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! It was a huge challenge to me but it was a lot of fun to explore these characters!

[deceptivechasm]

brilliantly done. I really enjoyed this fic.

[hunters_retreat]

Thank you so much! I had a great time writing this story. I'm so glad you liked it!