Remix Reveal!

[hungrytiger11]

Thoughts regarding the remix and the ficathon will be forthcoming. In the meantime, here's the remix I wrote, and the awesome story I based it on. On a side note, this story is a companion piece to The Space Between Us and takes place at the same wedding Hanabi's story starts at

Comments

[cutemara]

Wow, that was a lovely read! Thank you for sharing!

[hungrytiger11]

Yay! Thanks!

[hymnia]

I enjoyed reading this.

[hungrytiger11]

Thank you; I'm so glad you did!

[redbrunja]

Awesome.

I love how the seal gets so much more complex, and the ninja marriage info was totally awesome.

[hungrytiger11]

The seal would almost have to be more complex an issue if no one ever tried to put a stop to it before. I love ninja politics.

Thank you for reading!

[redbrunja]

The seal would almost have to be more complex an issue if no one ever tried to put a stop to it before. I love ninja politics

It really would.

On a strictly fannish level, I am so pleased with how many clever things Kishimoto hinted at that we can play around with.

[hungrytiger11]

The world building does leave so muh to play with; I really think there are multiple story ideas that he could have made a main story. Creative, that's for sure.

[queroli]

This is such an interesting take on the original story! I like how you wove in Kiba and Hinata's conflict within their conversation with Shino, as well as the little details like the chopsticks or the differing pressure of Kiba's fingernails. It's like it adds another layer to the story, I think.

[hungrytiger11]

Layers was the entire goal of this, so thank you so much!

[ultra_maniac]

This was a nice character piece for Hinata and I liked (though it got me angry XD) Kiba as well. I thought it was sort of a cool idea to have a face looking into the Hyuuga world that Hinata was naturally close to. It made a nice dramatic focus for the story.

Good job! I like your Hinata a lot!

[hungrytiger11]

I'm glad you still liked Kiba even though he made you mad (that's how he made me feel for this too). Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you thought!