Fic- Acts of Contrition

Oct 30, 2007 21:02



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luvmeanddespair October 31 2007, 03:05:31 UTC
Loving it, guys. Looking forward to more and the banner is 75% done. ^_~

Also:
He doesn’t need Yunho. Say it and it must be true, his mind throws at him cruelly, even as his shoulders straighten.

♥♥

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rawthorne October 31 2007, 13:22:11 UTC
Yay for you liking this and for the banner!

Visual aids always improve a story, I find ;)

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sharkbait_ha October 31 2007, 03:21:25 UTC
this is so amazing. I just died a little on the inside.
I love the futuristic kind of space thing~~

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rawthorne October 31 2007, 13:20:40 UTC
We love it too! Thanks for the review. Update should be up soon.

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cindelius October 31 2007, 05:29:41 UTC
I'm usually Really Not A Fan of AUs, but your promise of OT5 and other fun moresomes pulled me in. Now that I've read the prologue, I must admit that I'm intrigued ( ... )

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butterflyweb October 31 2007, 13:18:00 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to write such an in-depth comment, as well as provide a bit of con-crit along with compliments. :)

While we're aware that some aspects of the setting may be ambiguous and thusly, a tad confusing, but we want to avoid being deliberately expository and keep things centered in the characters perspective. That being said, things will become more clear over time, but for now, just think Military Space AU with revolutionaries in opposition. :)

(And point out our typos, yes please!)

Once again, thanks for reading and hope you enjoy the chapters to come.

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cindelius November 4 2007, 01:23:46 UTC
Regarding the typos, I've sent an email to your msn account with this information. I hope it's more helpful than pesky. :o)

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kurogoma October 31 2007, 06:57:39 UTC

I am hooked. Definitely waiting for updates.

I love anything OT5, especially interesting AUs, so am filled with anticipation.

Thought I can't help but noticed that Min is mixed up mostly with threesomes
rather than pairings unlike the other four under [current] Does that mean he wouldn't have a special someone, or he is just too sexy and wanted by everyone? :P

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rawthorne October 31 2007, 13:31:47 UTC
We're so happy you like it. Update should be up by Saturday, we promise.

Min will have his share of romance, but have no fear, the ultimate goal is to have an OT5. Now the way we'll get to that... you'll just have to wait and see. We promise it will be worth the wait.

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out_of_words24 October 31 2007, 11:28:06 UTC
This is very, very intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens, although the messed up Homin hurts me a little. Still, fantastic job, even if the setting and the terminology confuses me a little. I'll be watching out for the rest of this one. Awesome <3

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butterflyweb October 31 2007, 13:33:47 UTC
Hopefully, things will grow less confusing as the story progress, and hopefully you'll stay tuned!

(And I must say, I love love love your stuff, especially Facets. :))

Thanks for reading!

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