Thanks so much! I'm so very glad that you liked this. I re-wrote it several times, trying to tweak it just right for you. Once again, glad you liked it!
*watchs dazedly* IF that EVER happened in front of me, I think I'd die of mind failure. XD I love that Harry eventuallu fell in love with Harry and Severus was ...I dunno it sure isn't honourful enough to return him back.
well i think he did the right thing but that's just me. i'm not sure whether to congratulate tom for being so ingenious or pity harry because he never had a chance. i mean, he can't even get that far away without succumbing again. please continue
I agree, that's the idea that I was trying to get across. Lol, yes Tom was brillant in his own way. It was dark, I think because Harry is trapped, and now believes that he loves Tom. He needs him now, and could not leave him even if he somehow wanted to.
I love how you had Bella singing the tune from the movie 'Hocus Pocus'. You made it more sinister too! I like the way you used Snape here. Tom was interesting...evil yet tender and possessive, at least with Harry. You carried the dark overtune throughout the fic very well, keeping a congruous flow to the story. Keep up the good work!
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Do you have ANY idea of how much I love you right now?!
This is so delightfully dark that it took my breath away.
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And I've always believed that Severus would do what's best for Harry, regardless of how he felt in the end about the situation.
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Glad you liked it though!
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