Be my vampentine, the_tenshi

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Title: Taken, Captivated, Enchanted

Author: ??????

Gift for: the_tenshiPairing: Voldemort/Harry

Comments

[hpstrangelove]

Very nice - I especially love how Severus returns Harry to Tom in the end - that was definitely a surprise.

[veiledndarkness]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

[winnett]

Wow. This was very intense. I like the set-up, each paragraph a separate snap-shot. And Harry's addiction and brainwashing (or at least that's how I see it.)

I wasn't sure if I was going to like this one, but you turned it around from a straight non-con type story to something far more angsty and dark. Very nice.

[veiledndarkness]

Thanks! I'm very fond of 100 word drabbles, and it occured to me that I could use that style to convey the disorientation, the gradual descent for Harry. I'm glad you liked it, this pairing for me was something that I wasn't sure I could pull off successfully.

[mac_tunes]

Very.... dark... didn't think that Voldemort will take his muggle name, Tom Riddle. Nicely written though. I see the style - a number of drabbles written to make a whole story. An open end.

Bellatrix is like a Peter Piper, luring all those kids to be... drunk. Is weird to laugh at this imagery when the kids were killed?

And the *end* was a surprising one, of Severus taking Harry back to "Tom" as he couldn't stand Harry abusing himself and feeling as if he was tearing him and "Tom" apart somehow. So dark *shivers*

[veiledndarkness]

Thank you. I wasn't sure as to how Harry would address Voldemort, but I'd like to believe that the transition would have him coming around and loving Harry in his own twisted way, and then allowing Harry to see him in that manner.

Nah, I smiled at the thought. I was watching Hocus Pocus shortly before writing the story, and I had this image of Bella luring the children, dazzling them with magic.

Thanks again! I'm glad you liked it.

[dacro]

Love that slow turning from torture to pleasure to submission.

[veiledndarkness]

Thanks! Glad you liked it. I throughly enjoyed writing it, lol.

[lotrwariorgodss]

The pairing made me skeptical at first, but man, I liked it! The ending was amazing and the way you describe Harry's transformation was beautiful and horrible at the same time...poor Harry...
Lovely job!

[veiledndarkness]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!