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unrequited_rain in hpthenextgen

1 September 2017, 9:00 pm

Jul 26, 2007 01:36

( Albus and Scorpius's first night at Hogwarts )

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tortoises July 26 2007, 11:38:38 UTC

Uncle Percy and Uncle Oliver, they're gay but we don't talk about it. I heard they adopted a baby a few months ago though.

You win at life. XD

unrequited_rain July 26 2007, 20:46:57 UTC

thanks!

aigooism July 26 2007, 13:14:18 UTC

"Well," Albus scratched his head. "It was a long time ago, and Kreatcher died a few years ago. He was really old. But he did tell us about this one bloke, Phineas Nigellus. He used to be Headmaster here at Hogwarts ages ago, and he was a Slytherin."

"I've heard of him. Seemed like a decent bloke."

"According to Kreatcher he was awesome. He knew all sorts of magic and he could smell the fear of Gryffindors at twenty paces." Albus laughed. "I think he was making that part up though. But we used to have his portrait in our house. I don't know what happened to it though."

[[[might wanna take out the T from Kreacher's name?]]]

AHAHAHA I love the reference to Oliver/Percy!

And damn Fleur and Billy are Arthur and Molly with all those kids...

"Muggles," Scorpius snorted. "The things they think of. What's a telly?"

"Yeah." Albus giggled, thinking of the more inane practical jokes he had seen on the telly.

Was Al supposed to not answer him about the Telly?

Aside from my little nitpicking, I love it! I love your two boys! Squee!

museofspeed July 26 2007, 16:39:34 UTC

*smacks self* Two very dumb mistakes. I actually took out one of the t's in his name, forgot the rest, same with the Telly bit. We added that later and...I didn't answer the question...As soon as Rain stops not being alive, she can fix it.

I'm glad you like it!

aigooism July 26 2007, 16:42:28 UTC

Well, I didn't want to be nitpicky, but I figure since this is going so well, I'd help to make it all the more perfect ^^

museofspeed July 26 2007, 16:44:27 UTC

No, nit-picking's fine. So's constructive criticism. And cookies. They really help. Especially the chocolate chip type.

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ilovedragons July 26 2007, 15:34:57 UTC

Uncle Percy and Uncle Oliver, they're gay but we don't talk about it.

I'm reading this at work, and I actually squealed with delight. Now people are giving me weird looks.

This is great :D Keep it up!

unrequited_rain July 27 2007, 23:48:29 UTC

:D thanks

josanpq July 26 2007, 16:18:22 UTC

As said the others, more please.

unrequited_rain July 27 2007, 23:48:56 UTC

It's coming, no worries :)

harumi July 26 2007, 16:30:42 UTC

"You could have my brother if you wanted? I could probably spare him if you like." He grinned.

The use of the question mark there is just awkward.

But otherwise. Oh squee factor! This was so much fun. I'm looking forward to more updates.

museofspeed July 26 2007, 16:37:56 UTC

It's a question, just not in question form. Makes sense to me, in any case. Although this particular bit is riddled with mistakes that I really ought to smack myself for, I disagree with that particular one.

I'm glad you liked the rest, though!