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aigooism July 26 2007, 13:14:18 UTC
"Well," Albus scratched his head. "It was a long time ago, and Kreatcher died a few years ago. He was really old. But he did tell us about this one bloke, Phineas Nigellus. He used to be Headmaster here at Hogwarts ages ago, and he was a Slytherin."

"I've heard of him. Seemed like a decent bloke."

"According to Kreatcher he was awesome. He knew all sorts of magic and he could smell the fear of Gryffindors at twenty paces." Albus laughed. "I think he was making that part up though. But we used to have his portrait in our house. I don't know what happened to it though."

[[[might wanna take out the T from Kreacher's name?]]]

AHAHAHA I love the reference to Oliver/Percy!

And damn Fleur and Billy are Arthur and Molly with all those kids...

"Muggles," Scorpius snorted. "The things they think of. What's a telly?"

"Yeah." Albus giggled, thinking of the more inane practical jokes he had seen on the telly.

Was Al supposed to not answer him about the Telly?

Aside from my little nitpicking, I love it! I love your two boys! Squee!

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museofspeed July 26 2007, 16:39:34 UTC
*smacks self* Two very dumb mistakes. I actually took out one of the t's in his name, forgot the rest, same with the Telly bit. We added that later and...I didn't answer the question...As soon as Rain stops not being alive, she can fix it.

I'm glad you like it!

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aigooism July 26 2007, 16:42:28 UTC
Well, I didn't want to be nitpicky, but I figure since this is going so well, I'd help to make it all the more perfect ^^

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museofspeed July 26 2007, 16:44:27 UTC
No, nit-picking's fine. So's constructive criticism. And cookies. They really help. Especially the chocolate chip type.

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unrequited_rain July 26 2007, 20:01:26 UTC
yes, cookies help IMMENSELY :D and I'm sorry I've been dead, I just woke up after more painting yesterday I'll fix it!

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