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FIC : Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe? - Round One

Mar 14, 2006 18:36

Title: Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe?
Author: shocolate
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Words: 1300
Rating: PG-13

Written for the hprwfqf First Round.

My prompt was…

At Hogwarts :- 7. Ron becomes the first person to touch Harry's scar besides Harry. It's a big deal to Harry.

It seems to be a Missing Moment at Christmas in HBP - hence the lack of smut!

Thanks, as ever, to magicofisis ( Read more... )

2006, shocolate, pg-13, round 1

Comments 99

aome March 14 2006, 18:58:44 UTC

Aww, this was wonderfully sweet. I liked how light it was - very teenage boyish - but also not a Big Horny Moment for them, either. (Not that that can't be fun ;) but it's nice to have some variety.) Anyway, I really enjoyed every moment of this, including the title.

I remembered how impressed he’d been on the train, the first time he’d seen it. And how quickly he’d moved past that.

Which is one of the absolute best things about Ron. *squishes him*

shocolate March 14 2006, 19:05:00 UTC

Yes - I couldn't achieve smut at school anymore!!!

*squishes him too*

*and you*

kerryblaze March 14 2006, 19:03:07 UTC

*sniff* Oh, what a way to kick this off! So, sweet, and Ron and Harry are so wonderful together. weetheart! *giggles*

shocolate March 14 2006, 19:05:44 UTC

How is he gonna explain that to Lavender???

Thank you!!

brumeux77 March 14 2006, 23:22:17 UTC

With a Reparo, natch.

simons_flower March 14 2006, 19:04:45 UTC

I love the interaction of the boys here, teasing each other and just being themselves. Sweet and fluffy, but serious too.

shocolate March 14 2006, 19:06:39 UTC

Their interaction in that chapter of the book just rocked my socks - they couldn't have been closer.

*squishes them*

*and you*

abigail89 March 14 2006, 19:30:24 UTC

I was wondering where this was going to go, because ya know, if they had done...anything, it couldn't be a proper missing scene, eh?

Nice! All that writhing about is pretty funny, especially when boys talk about it like that.

Still, I like 'em older when they can writhe about together.

*squidges the boys and you*

shocolate March 14 2006, 20:03:15 UTC

Well, yes, the prompt being 'at Hogwarts' - nothing could happen!

Except love.

*nods*

reallycorking March 14 2006, 19:31:21 UTC

Aww, I LOVE this, dear! Sigh. Their interaction was so realistic and tender. :D :D :D

shocolate March 14 2006, 20:03:36 UTC

Aww - thank you - our boys are just so cute.