FIC : Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe? - Round One

Mar 14, 2006 18:36

Title: Doesn’t Anything Else Writhe?
Author: shocolate
Pairing: Harry/Ron
Words: 1300
Rating: PG-13

Written for the hprwfqf First Round.

My prompt was…

At Hogwarts :- 7. Ron becomes the first person to touch Harry's scar besides Harry. It's a big deal to Harry.

It seems to be a Missing Moment at Christmas in HBP - hence the lack of smut!

Thanks, as ever, to magicofisisRead more... )

2006, shocolate, pg-13, round 1

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sparkysparky March 14 2006, 19:55:32 UTC
I really like friend!fic...that has possibilities to become a More Than Friends!fic in the future. This was beautiful, and I felt the sparks that Harry felt. :-D Great FQF entry! I'm just starting to work on mine! *feels like a slacker*

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shocolate March 14 2006, 20:04:17 UTC
Yes, clearly nothing could happen that Christmas - but look at how close they are in the book?

So adorable.

Thank you!

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doroteah March 14 2006, 19:58:16 UTC
Oh God. I mean. Who needs smut?
*drawns in the LOVE that is H/R*

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shocolate March 14 2006, 20:04:44 UTC
Yes.

Just love.

He is loved.

*sniff*

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tqpannie March 14 2006, 20:05:41 UTC
This was a wonderful missing moment from the books. Very lovely and sweet. Ron's earned the right to touch that scar first!

“Look, it’s normal stuff for our age,” I said. “Just what I need, a bit of normal.”

“Well,” he sighed. “Just let me know if there is anyone else I can snog for your amusement.”

These lines--complete canon.

*huggles you*
*squishes you*

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shocolate March 14 2006, 20:46:39 UTC
*loves them both so much*

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alem March 14 2006, 20:31:35 UTC
Well done!! Very well done. I'm not sure what to say to explain it, but seriously, cool.

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shocolate March 14 2006, 20:46:53 UTC
Many thanks!

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sunnyrea March 14 2006, 20:36:48 UTC
I liked that. It was nice and subtle. There aren't enough H/R fics like this.

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shocolate March 14 2006, 20:47:07 UTC
Aww, thank you!!!

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