Bones fanfiction - The Bet - Ch 6

[hpaich]

It was the only kind of bet he made anymore. And the stakes were impossibly high. Rated M for later chapters. Romance/Angst/Humor. Definitely BB, some Hodgela, and Zach!
Chapter 1: hpaich.livejournal.com/14992.html
Chapter 2: hpaich.livejournal.com/17749.html
Chapter 3: hpaich.livejournal.com/19215.html
Chapter 4: hpaich.livejournal.com/20837.html

Comments

[labsquint]

Ah, look at Booth being the perfect gentleman! Oh, we do love our chivalrous Booth, don't we?

What a great chapter. Brennan has had it with the extended foreplay, but Booth still seems to be in chivalrous mode and is trying to back off. How did I know that when he finally gave in, it was going to be an absolute whirlwind?

Oh, damn the phone call! But funny... because I've used that ploy myself to stretch things out.

Springing to his feet, he began to pace in an attempt to calm his body, which obviously hadn’t gotten the same phone call he and Bones had.

Ha! Liked that line. Funny...

Oh, things are going to boil over soon. When they finally get down to it, I have a feeling that it will be pure fireworks!

[hpaich]

You've used the phone call? Hmmm...interesting. I've never done that! Heh.

Brennan is definitely very aggressive - almost manlike - in her approach to sex. I have quite a bit of fun writing her that way, I have to admit! And Booth - yes, he's trying to do the right thing, but his libido is protesting mightily. So yeah, there are definitely going to be fireworks down the road....

[labsquint]

You've used the phone call?

Oh yeah, in the first chapter of Burial in Green Ridge Forest and to interrupt that kind of moment as well. And just as they were really getting started... ;) http://labsquint.livejournal.com/12277.html

[hpaich]

Okay, MY face is an unlikely shade of fuschia right now...I thought you meant you'd used it in RL!

SO sorry - oy, ME = FAIL!

And here I was, thinking, 'Man, that girl is GOOD.' I was getting all worship-y on you for being so quick-thinking. Although I did wonder how you managed to arrange the call....yeah, I'm a bit sleep deprived this week, can you tell?

LOVE LOVE LOVE the chapter you sent to me! Gonna review, and bookmark, 'cause I'm def gonna read the rest. Thanks!

[purecreation]

Just commenting to give you the deserved high praise over this fic! You're a fantastic writer! I just read the whole 16 chapters in a day and am craving more! Can't wait for an update!

[hpaich]

Wow, thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying the story, as I've had a lot of fun writing it. And man, can you read or what? I've never been able to read that quickly, yet you finished 16 chappies in a day? That's amazing.

Thanks again for dropping me a line, and stay tuned for more!

[purecreation]

LOL I can't write fiction worth a hoot, and so I make up for it in mad reading skills, apparently. ;D I'm working my way through all of your other works now. I'm particularly in love with your post-ep tags. So many wonderful Bones eps end just on the edge of a major breakthrough, and how you finish them couldn't be more perfect and inline with what I would love to see for Booth and Brennan.

Anyhoo, I'll definitely be pimping your name out on my flist! :D

[hpaich]

Well, thanks again! Aren't you sweet!

Ah, yes, the tags. Season 4 was quite a year for tags. I think I was so frustrated with the direction the show was taking that I simply HAD to continue, if only to flesh out some possible reasons for why they were doing what they did. I have to say, though, I may not be doing many for Season 5 - I love what they've done so far!

And thank you for the pimping - I always did want to see my name in rhinestones! HAHAHA