Comments | hp_tarot: The Hierophant: Fic: Snape/Lucius/Voldemort: NC-17

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The Hierophant: Fic: Snape/Lucius/Voldemort: NC-17

Feb 22, 2007 19:18

Title: The Hierophant
Author: ThreeSidedOrchid (Lj: Synn)
Type: Fiction
Length: approx. 2877
Main Character or Pairing: Snape/Lucius/Voldemort
Card: The Hierophant
Card Interpretation: "At his feet two acolytes kneel, but do they kneel ( Read more... )

card: the hierophant, nc-17, round 1, fic, snape/lucius/voldemort, by: synn

Comments 28

ravenna_c_tan February 23 2007, 04:05:08 UTC

Oh my goodness, I'm drooling. That was so lovely, so nicely turned. I just... wow. I loved, loved, loved the language in this story, the measured pace, Severus' point of view.

The butter.

Just wow.

The unspoken implication that it might have been Lucius' first time on the bottom was delicious also, just the entire seductive build up... brilliant.

Thank you so much for writing this!

synn February 23 2007, 22:30:59 UTC

And Thank you so much for such lovely feedback!

heh... the butter. Y'know, I hardley even finished wondering what they would use for lube before 'so lonely without me' popped into my head and suggested the butter....
Somehow I just couldn't picture Lucius Malfoy eager to put a food product to such use.

Glad you liked it, and thank you again! : )

clauclauclaudia February 23 2007, 04:58:25 UTC

“Would you like to touch it?”
“Please,” Severus whispers, barely managing the word. He’s almost startled when the Dark Lord’s fingers curl around his, bringing his hand forward to rest against the mark. Magic tingles through them, conducted from the Dark Lord to Lucius.
“Do you like that?”
Severus looks up, prepared to answer, but the Dark Lord isn’t speaking to him.
“Yes,” Lucius gasps, back arching when the Dark Lord presses their fingers down harder.

Mmmph. I think this passage is even hotter than the sex. This is lovely through and through.

synn February 23 2007, 22:33:59 UTC

Lol, me too, actually. There's a reason for that, but I won't bore you with the explanation.

Thank you, though, for the kind feedback! I'm glad you liked it
: )

free_the_goats February 23 2007, 07:30:55 UTC

Just wonderful. Hot and real and just...gaah. Yes.

synn February 23 2007, 22:35:23 UTC

*grins* Thank you!

rubymiene February 23 2007, 07:52:16 UTC

::stares:: Hot, and yet, so disturbing. Severus being drawn in like that...Lucius' distaste at have butter up his arse...Severus on the train...the details really make the story.

synn February 23 2007, 22:39:15 UTC

I'm glad the more disturbing aspects came through -- it was a tricky balancing act, trying to make it both without overdoing it on either account.

Thank you! : )

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synn February 23 2007, 22:54:13 UTC

*blushes* wow, I think yours goes on my list of favorite feedback. Thank you!

I'm really glad you mentioned the symbols -- I love working with them in stories, and knowing when people pick up on them and enjoy them. The gold was one of the symbols I included after reading about its use in tarot symbology. It just fit perfectly for what I wanted to present, and it was a lot of fun to manipulate the multiple meanings it could have.

And the seduction of power was precisely what I wanted to get across. I'm so glad it worked for you, thank you again for the lovely feedback!