FIC: The Hour of Separation HP/SS

Aug 14, 2008 13:31

Title: The Hour of Separation
Author:Cyane_Snape
Pairing or Main Characters: Harry Potter, Severus Snape. Minor: Hermione Granger. Unrequited slash.
Fic or Art?: Fic
Word length: ~6000
Warning: You might want a tissue. Some minor playing with time regarding Horcruxes, their creation and who possessed them when. Also, Nagini sounds rather “Gollum ( Read more... )

nc-17, round 3, fic, snape, by: cyane_snape, harry

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venturous1 August 14 2008, 19:00:00 UTC
wow, amazing. I love your twisted mind!
**sniffle**

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cyane_snape August 14 2008, 19:48:45 UTC
Thanks. I had major angst when I drew those cards. It's so far away from what I usually write. But I decided to go with the flow and accept the karma.

Thanks again,
Cyane

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lotrwariorgodss August 15 2008, 02:41:55 UTC
Oh man, what a trip. So tragic - they could have had each other, but Harry had to go and be himself and try to fix everybody. Gah! He's so stubborn!
I can only imagine what poor Snape will have to go through if he retains his memory, having to love Lily, but seeing and loving Harry through his son...he just can't have it easy no matter what, can he? Lol. I can only hope *crosses fingers* that maybe something of Harry was reincarnated in Raiden, and that he's found happiness at last too. Lovely entry!

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cyane_snape August 15 2008, 14:13:28 UTC
Thanks. It was a long hard trip trying to put the words down. Glad you liked it.

Cyane

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zephre August 15 2008, 03:59:16 UTC
Wow, what a moving, exquisite tragedy. And to have Hermione aware, too, and only she and Snape understanding what went before... those cards are cruel, indeed.
I especially love the way the Ten of Pentacles Reversed comes into play at the end- that is a twisted, horrifying reversal!

well done.

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cyane_snape August 15 2008, 14:15:35 UTC
Thanks so much. It ended up very different than my original plan, which is always the case when I write. I think the only thing that's the same is the summary and the part about Harry's mind not being quite right.

thanks again,
Cyane

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mariposaluna August 16 2008, 15:37:27 UTC
OMG! This was an amazing story! It was totally unpredictable, to me at least, and the many twists and turns flowed together so well. It is so wonderfully unique and tragic. I couldn't tell you don't normally write angst. It came across so well and often. And his son looking like Harry! OMG such torture! I could see him and Hermione keeping their memories and trying to live with them in this new reality. Absolutely messed up crazy, but in a great angsty way. I loved this story and I'm adding it to my memories!

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cyane_snape August 16 2008, 18:14:52 UTC
Thanks so much. When I drew the cards, my beta said, "Oh, no. Not another dark story. [See my last tarot fest fic - Death Sentence]. I said "Yep." It's just that humor is so EASY for me...
It took a while to figure it all out, but I'm pleased with it. Glad you liked it.

Cyane

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calanor August 17 2008, 05:38:48 UTC
Well damn.. now I can't stop crying..

and Harry still makes the ultimate sacrifice for those he loves..

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cyane_snape August 17 2008, 12:41:00 UTC
Harry's like that, isn't he. Get out the tissues and read something funny. Or eat some ice cream and chocolate.

Thanks,
Cyaen

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