Eleven Things - a gift for inadaze22

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Title: Eleven Things
Author: kate0404
Gift for: inadaze22
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,968
Summary: Draco has a list of things he wants to do before he dies, and Hermione

Comments

[dj_pagal]

Awww that was simply lovely hehehe they started off that list and wow those were beautiful places they went to and aww number one on his list was to marry hermione granger awwwwww

[cardigankate]

Thanks, hon! :) I'm so glad you liked it.

[dj_pagal]

your welcome XD, i really liked how you had appraoched the concept :D

[thebigdisaster]

I have got to say that this is my favorite Dramione story out of the bunch and it probably will stay that way since I loathe to change my mind ;). I gotta say that my favorit lines is:

Hermione’s heart was pounding in her chest as she envisioned small, frizzy, blond children running around their home. She wanted it so badly.

I laughed and I wanted it for her. You're AMAZING and I think you kicked this ball entirely out of the park and into another dimension of awesome...forgive me for my weirdness. It's very late.

[cardigankate]

Oh. My. Gosh. Your favorite?! Did you ever change your mind? (Secretly hopes you didn't - LOL). I'm so glad you liked it. And your review totally made me smile. :) Don't worry... I'm weird when it gets late, too (or any other time of the day...).

[bablefisk]

Aww! This was so lovely!

[cardigankate]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)

[dynonugget]

I just love this one! Draco is just perfect, so snarky and yet so cute! And I love how in love Hermione is, yet so enjoyable. Not too fluffy - just right!! It's so romantic, so funny - you at your best!!! Awesome! I know inadaze22 will love it - along with everyone else!!

[cardigankate]

WEE! Thank you, hon! And thank you for the quick beta'ing. You iz my hero. :)

Loves!

*dances like Linus in a Charlie Brown Christmas*

[inadaze22]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

*breathes*

Ok, I got that out! Now I can begin the real review.

Oh how I love thee, let me count the ways. First, I LOVED the banter at the beginning about why there were 11 things and not ten or 12. Heeehehee. I loved Hermione's quirk about odd numbers. Second, the snark! Hahahahaha!

“I don’t want to have to call a house elf in to clean up the mess when your head spins off into another dimension.” ROFL!

Draco’s left eyebrow rose slightly, but she saw the smirk on his lips. She wanted to smack it - or kiss it, she wasn’t sure - right off his face. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! One of my favorite lines.

Ok, gotta stop quoting or I'll end up reprinting this in the comment.

Next, I loved the toothbrush scene! I about choked on my water when it turned into a portkey. The toothbrush! AHAHAHAHAHA!

I can see that you did a lot of research, the places were beautiful. And you hit on all my prompts and I could just hug you and put you in my pocket and take you home with me *ehem

Re: *dances like Linus in a Charlie Brown Christmas*

[cardigankate]

I saved your response for last. LOL. I'm so glad you liked it! SQUEE! I was totally nervous. Hehe. But I saw your review and I totally SQUEE'd and jumped up and down. Haha!

*attacks with hugs*

P.S. Damn you and your 11 things. :P