Eleven Things - a gift for inadaze22

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Title: Eleven Things
Author: kate0404
Gift for: inadaze22
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,968
Summary: Draco has a list of things he wants to do before he dies, and Hermione

Comments

*dances like Linus in a Charlie Brown Christmas*

[inadaze22]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

*breathes*

Ok, I got that out! Now I can begin the real review.

Oh how I love thee, let me count the ways. First, I LOVED the banter at the beginning about why there were 11 things and not ten or 12. Heeehehee. I loved Hermione's quirk about odd numbers. Second, the snark! Hahahahaha!

“I don’t want to have to call a house elf in to clean up the mess when your head spins off into another dimension.” ROFL!

Draco’s left eyebrow rose slightly, but she saw the smirk on his lips. She wanted to smack it - or kiss it, she wasn’t sure - right off his face. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! One of my favorite lines.

Ok, gotta stop quoting or I'll end up reprinting this in the comment.

Next, I loved the toothbrush scene! I about choked on my water when it turned into a portkey. The toothbrush! AHAHAHAHAHA!

I can see that you did a lot of research, the places were beautiful. And you hit on all my prompts and I could just hug you and put you in my pocket and take you home with me *ehem*

Last but not least, the proposal scene *swoons*

“Which, by the way, does not only include travelling, but learning how to make homemade pizza and having a family.”

Hermione’s heart was pounding in her chest as she envisioned small, frizzy, blond children running around their home. She wanted it so badly.

*sniffs*

So cute! I loved it, mystery author! It was light and sweet and hilarious, you hit on all my prompts, and you did it awesomely. I loved quirky!Hermione and I love composed and patient!Draco. He is made of win. *swoons* Wee!

*attacks you with hugs*

Re: *dances like Linus in a Charlie Brown Christmas*

[cardigankate]

I saved your response for last. LOL. I'm so glad you liked it! SQUEE! I was totally nervous. Hehe. But I saw your review and I totally SQUEE'd and jumped up and down. Haha!

*attacks with hugs*

P.S. Damn you and your 11 things. :P