FIC: Al’s Fixation (Albus Severus/James Sirius, NC-17)

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Title: Al’s Fixation
Author: nia-kantorka
Prompt: #20 from hp_kinkfest 2015 by gracerene
Pairing(s): James Sirius/Albus Severus
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,067
Content/Warnings:[Spoiler (click to open)]Erotic asphyxiation, Incest, Rimming, Anal sex
Summary: It’s been two months since he walked in on me. Since he found me - pants down, prick in hand, scarf tight around the neck.
Author's Notes:Grace,

Comments

[my_thestral]

OMG, was this hot and sweet or what?! *drools all over this story* The incest fics are always so sexy-wrong, but this one takes the crown!
The sex scenes are scorching hot - I only wish I knew how to write like that! They're just close enough to the edge of danger to make them enticing and but the real magic of this story for me is the underlying affection, that goes beyond brotherly love, and all that trust the Potter-Weasleys cannot find anywhere outside of their own circle. In my opinion it's that bond of love and trust, which you portrayed so well, that makes this story into such a gem. :)
And the characters - wonderful! You've created such a caring, playful yet responsible and totally loveable big brother James and a slightly insecure, totally sweet Jamie that has just enough of a kinky streak that you can imagine him being a star of every wanking fantasy James has ever had - and with little remorse at that.
There should definitely be more of this story! Sequel, anyone? :)

[nia_kantorka]

Thank you for your wonderful comment, hon! It really brightened my day that kink and incest notwithstanding their affection and love were the most important parts. It was intented like that and I'm happy and proud it came across.

Tbh, I can't see a sequel looming for these two, but I might write that pairing again. It was so much fun to go for a dirtyhotwrong fic with many feels. :D

[my_thestral]

Dear Nia, you're most welcome! Such a wonderful story to read, I enjoyed every word. Well, if the sequel is not something you can fathom, then you should definitely consider doing this pairing more often, it lies so well with you! :)

[digthewriter]

Sweet ending!

[nia_kantorka]

Thank you, Dig!

[gracerene]

OH MY GOD! OMG OMG OMG! Oh this was brilliant, you wonderful, wonderful person. <33

Seriously, I love everything about this. It's beyond perfect. I love Al's voice, his desperate need, and the way he see's his brother. You just captured that love and adoration so perfectly.

Your James is a thing of beauty, and I am seriously in love with how you described him as a lighter, more carefree Harry. That's totally how I see him! And I loved that he was a Healer! That made so much sense for him wanting to help his brother out. :D

black skinny jeans, black trainers, purple tee and light grey hoodie --> Such a small detail but so perfect! I could picture him exactly right here in his casual outfit, bouncing around in nervous anticipation.

Um, JFC the sex was smoking hot. Seriously, seriously, seriously hot! This isn't a kink I see a lot of (obviously) and honestly you did such a beyond brilliant job of it, and the kink, with the rimming, and the sex, and the gorgeous kissing...EEEEEE, I'm just so happy

[nia_kantorka]

Your comment made me grin like a lunatic. And, yes, it still has that power. \o/

I'm so happy that you loved it and that I could write you a kinky story you really wanted to read. And, hon, I'm proud of you. You could have but didn't take a pick - it must have been a hard thing to do.

It's wonderful that the descriptions matched with your headcanon of the characters or that you could picture them and that you found it hot too. Such a brilliant comment. *beams*

Yes, James is the perfect gentleman here, taking such good care of his younger brother. ;p

Oh, I nearly forgot. Thank you for the rec, hon! ♥

[cabinetcaligari]

OH MY GOD.

That summary? This pairing? Those warnings? Cart me away already, as I’m a melted mess and I didn’t even start.

Okay, MA. This sucked me right in, you start with a bang and it’s so freaking hot already! Your James description is perfect, your Albus voice is wonderfully kinky and insecure and defensive and so believable. Gah, and then James confessing he finds Albus absolutely hot.. that is so wrong and kinky and I LOVE IT.

I love how you jump between time frames to give us all the delicious things. The initial shock when I learn they do this regularly. That embarrassing moment when James walks in on Albus. Their first time, I felt all giddy with anticipation too, you build up the tension so well and I really felt like devouring this piece, riveted to my screen.

”I want you in every way you’re comfortable with.”*DIES

[nia_kantorka]

OMG, your comment! I loved this comment. For a minute I thought to print it out and to look at it whenever I think my writing is crap. I didn't because it's just not a thing to do, but yeah, I might have read it a few times these past days. :D

All the quotes made me so happy and that you just wanted to read it again. Gosh, I'm still getting smashed by this comment. Thank you so much!

I'm really glad that I could convince you to follow me to the dark side of brothercest - it's such a hot and wrong and great thing to love. :D

[cabinetcaligari]

I really had NO idea this was you! It was so hot, so interlaced with feeeeeeelings, so boldly written. I adored it to pieces and I also would love to be friends because WHY am I not yet friends with someone who not only convinces me to join the dark brothercest side, but also makes me consider to apply for a high position within the Brothercest Hood because I totally need more of this in my life...

[nia_kantorka]

Ah, I'm sorry, my feeds are not working like they should.

I'll try to write some more things like this. I do have some other cests (uh, that's not really a word, isn't it?) in my mind as well. The Potter-Weasley family is full of inspirational characters. But no need to worry, there'll be definitely more brothercest from me sooner or later. ;p

Thank you for friending me! I have no clue why we haven't done that already. *shakes head at herself*

[capitu]

Holy shit, mystery author. Holy shit! This was smoking hot. Like, seriously hot and at the same time it was so very sweet! It's just, wow.

The very beginning of the story, the way you introduced it, beyond hot. Fuck, I love them together and the way you wrote them is perfect. I loved the way you described Al, or rather the way he described himself? That intro by the pinch speaker was spot on because it gave me a perfect visual of him.

And James being so perfect for him, pair of ~perverts they are. Gah!!!

“Jamie… I want your fingers, not a scarf, around my throat and I want you to fuck me while doing it. Could you do that for me?” It was my way to say I love you too. I really do.

Lord, so very hot, dear mystery author! And this sweet ending, the right touch to leave you with a smile just before the to start being hot all over again. Delicious. Thank you! <333

[nia_kantorka]

Haha, hon! You totally got that Al - the walking temptation - talked to the reader every once in a while. It was so much fun to make him do.

Thank you for your wonderful comment, sweetheart! And for the rec too! ♥

Oh the ending. It gave me a hard time. Too sweet? Not sweet enough? But the more time after finishing the story had passed, the more I liked the ending. So, thanks for telling me it worked! :D