FIC: Al’s Fixation (Albus Severus/James Sirius, NC-17)

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Title: Al’s Fixation
Author: nia-kantorka
Prompt: #20 from hp_kinkfest 2015 by gracerene
Pairing(s): James Sirius/Albus Severus
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4,067
Content/Warnings:[Spoiler (click to open)]Erotic asphyxiation, Incest, Rimming, Anal sex
Summary: It’s been two months since he walked in on me. Since he found me - pants down, prick in hand, scarf tight around the neck.
Author's Notes:Grace,

Comments

[gracerene]

OH MY GOD! OMG OMG OMG! Oh this was brilliant, you wonderful, wonderful person. <33

Seriously, I love everything about this. It's beyond perfect. I love Al's voice, his desperate need, and the way he see's his brother. You just captured that love and adoration so perfectly.

Your James is a thing of beauty, and I am seriously in love with how you described him as a lighter, more carefree Harry. That's totally how I see him! And I loved that he was a Healer! That made so much sense for him wanting to help his brother out. :D

black skinny jeans, black trainers, purple tee and light grey hoodie --> Such a small detail but so perfect! I could picture him exactly right here in his casual outfit, bouncing around in nervous anticipation.

Um, JFC the sex was smoking hot. Seriously, seriously, seriously hot! This isn't a kink I see a lot of (obviously) and honestly you did such a beyond brilliant job of it, and the kink, with the rimming, and the sex, and the gorgeous kissing...EEEEEE, I'm just so happy.

The ending was really perfect. I loved how you showed their emotional connection here, and James's own vulnerability. It was a lovely switch seeing Albus care for James, and seeing the give and take there. And James is quite the gentleman to insist on thanking him so thoroughly! ♥

[nia_kantorka]

Your comment made me grin like a lunatic. And, yes, it still has that power. \o/

I'm so happy that you loved it and that I could write you a kinky story you really wanted to read. And, hon, I'm proud of you. You could have but didn't take a pick - it must have been a hard thing to do.

It's wonderful that the descriptions matched with your headcanon of the characters or that you could picture them and that you found it hot too. Such a brilliant comment. *beams*

Yes, James is the perfect gentleman here, taking such good care of his younger brother. ;p

Oh, I nearly forgot. Thank you for the rec, hon! ♥