Fic: "Conservatory", Lucius/Narcissa, Bellatrix/Rodolphus, PG-13

[scythia]

Title: "Conservatory"
Author: scythia
Word Count: 853
Pairing: Lucius/Narcissa, Bellatrix/Rodolphus, assorted Slytherins
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Before the Death Eaters, before Azkaban, before Harry Potter, there were garden parties -- and there were the Black sisters.
A/N: for alliante,who gave me ages ago a fic request with the prompt 'Lucius/Narcissa -- if the

Comments

[yeats]

Oh, you! This is so good!

[scythia]

Thank you, my dear :)

[inathunderstorm]

Oh, what a lovely fic! I really like the imagery and the "beat" of the story, if that makes any sense. It's gorgeously written, as well.

[scythia]

Thank you so much!

[anadamous]

Ah, this is written so well! I love the simple/flitting voice you're using.

[scythia]

Thanks! :)

[good_conduct]

There's something about the style that makes this feel so scrumptiously decadent, and yet so prim and proper. The hint of emotion completes it beautifully. Really, really wonderful.

[scythia]

That's the sort of tension I was going for -- I'm glad to hear you felt it. Thank you so much :)

[alliante]

omg adkjfhlkagf.

This was lovely, and much more simpler than your usual style (often your descriptions go round and round in my head and suddenly they spit me out and they take on a whole new meaning). No verbal dialogue (well, apostrophe-wise, anyway), almost like telling a story verbally to someone. And the capitalization of PORTIA and RABASTAN - is that alluding to play/script format or is that just me?

Anyway, fab fab fabbity fucking fab. Gruh.

[scythia]

Lol! Thank you -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry it took me ages to write!

And yes, it's supposed to be like a script, a script for Bella and Narcissa's twisted little play ;)