Fic: "Conservatory", Lucius/Narcissa, Bellatrix/Rodolphus, PG-13

[scythia]

Title: "Conservatory"
Author: scythia
Word Count: 853
Pairing: Lucius/Narcissa, Bellatrix/Rodolphus, assorted Slytherins
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Before the Death Eaters, before Azkaban, before Harry Potter, there were garden parties -- and there were the Black sisters.
A/N: for alliante,who gave me ages ago a fic request with the prompt 'Lucius/Narcissa -- if the

Comments

[peppery_lime]

oooooooooooooooooooooooo. Interesting format for the story telling. Fascinating story to be telling. i like your descriptions and your flow. You did good! :D Thank you so much for sharing

[scythia]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[nannyo]

beautiful and creepy, and powerful and sad all at once. Thank you very much. I love the rythm of this, and the way that the words dance in my head. I think you have captured the feel of a careful dance in your language. Lovely.
N.

[scythia]

What a wonderful comment! "A careful dance" -- I really like that. Thank you so much. :D

[scythia]

Thank you so much! I love Bella and Narcissa - wicked, wicked girls. ;)

[underlucius]

Brava!!!!

*standing ovation*

This is brilliant, utterly brilliant. It is SO much like stupid parties I had to attend as a young person, with ruffled dresses and sitting there watching and hating every minute of it. I adored the image of Rabastan's shellacked hair. and the Rabastan part was so clever I could hug you to death.

Thank you so much.

xxx

[scythia]

I always love getting your comments! They're always so thoughtfully written, and this one is no exception. :D Thank you, m'dear :)

[starrysummer]

Oh, this is just beautiful! They are cruel and it's all done so prettily, so innocently. I love the last line, it just leaves this image that's full of beauty and deceit.

Ack, work time now.

[scythia]

Thank you! And thanks for telling me to post it last night! ;) Time for work for me too, alas....