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Dialogue Challenge: Severus/Lucius - R

Jul 31, 2006 20:00

The Night Before
by underlucius
Severus/Lucius (R)
Disgraceful meld of movie and book canon

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lucius, titles: m-z, snape/lucius, underlucius, dialogue only challenge, severus snape

Comments 18

viverra_libro July 31 2006, 19:13:11 UTC

Mm, a disgraceful mix, perhaps, but a lovely result. This is one of the most coherent dialogue-only fics I've seen, and yes, quite sad, for all its loveliness. Thanks for giving us one last hurrah.

underlucius July 31 2006, 19:59:23 UTC

Hee! Thank you! Was nice to get them out for a last snuggle. Was very tempting to put non-dialogue stuff in, but I was strict with myself. Very pleased you liked it!

xxx

le_negronomicon July 31 2006, 20:09:29 UTC

oh my!!!

that last line was the clincher for me.

excellently done through-out, however!

underlucius July 31 2006, 20:18:57 UTC

Thank you! Poor Lucius. Never to be seen again, if JKR has anything to do with it!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

xxx

ariadneelda July 31 2006, 20:14:18 UTC

Ooh, this was great! Wonderful dialogue! Loved the humour throughout, especially the hat part. *g* And then the ending - it made me sad. Poor Lucius. *is also sad at the prospect of no more Underlucius!fic* But thanks for this last one. :-)

underlucius July 31 2006, 20:20:11 UTC

Thank you darling, really happy you liked them. So love the boys...

Lovely icon too, btw.

xxx

stephanometra July 31 2006, 20:41:06 UTC

Oh, poor Lucius. The last line is heartbreakingly perfect.

underlucius July 31 2006, 21:02:42 UTC

Thank you so much!

xxx

lyras July 31 2006, 21:24:29 UTC

This is sad and lovely - and I speak as someone who usually has no sympathy for Lucius. It reads like an elegy to their relationship, but it's sexy, too. Beautiful!

underlucius July 31 2006, 21:29:17 UTC

If I've made one person look at Lucius in a different way, then my time in fandom isn't completely wasted!!

Thank you sweetie, for reading, commenting and being such a supporter of the comm.

xxx

lyras July 31 2006, 21:38:58 UTC

You're welcome. It's been a lovely part of my time in fandom, so thank you so much for setting it up, and I'm glad to see that Spess and sazzlette are carrying on the good work!