imitation challenge fic: The way you fall (Remus/Sirius)

[musesfool]

Eeep! Sorry for screwing up the cut-tag. It was 3am is my only excuse

Comments

[underlucius]

*heart breaking*

You killed me. There are too many fantastic things in this to quote - but the biblical reference... gah.

Quite quite stunning. *recs Madly*

xxx

ps - is this for the Imitation Challenge? Could you put that on the header or subject line so it's easier for eumenides to find it when doing the round up?

[musesfool]

Thank you so much, both for the lovely feedback and the glowing rec. I'm so glad you actually liked it, that it worked. *g* Thank you.

And I've edited the subject line.

[musesfool]

Thank you!

[thistlerose]

God, that's gorgeous. *is breathless*

breathe

[musesfool]

Thank you! I'm so happy it worked for you!

It works

[jazzypom]

It has a sort of frenetic babbling quality about it. Although it is written in future tense, there's also a sort of present past, layers of time thing that is going on. There's alot to see and feel in this. It is very dense, and very well done.

Thanks for writing this, and I'm so glad that you're not at the WHC! :D

Re: It works

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you think it worked. I definitely was going for a breathless, reels-you-in-and-doesn't-let-go kind of thing. *G*

[ladylornadoone]

Oh, wonderful. Completely overwhelming.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much!