imitation challenge fic: The way you fall (Remus/Sirius)

[musesfool]

Eeep! Sorry for screwing up the cut-tag. It was 3am is my only excuse

Comments

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it works for you, and that you enjoyed it.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy it works for you, and seems Faulkner-esque. *g*

*uses Faulkner icon*

[musesfool]

Thank you so much!

[seagreenish]

I'm... undone. This is stunning. In a technical sense it's powerful because it's two utterly intense formats (future tense and second person) rolled into one piece, effectively making it impossible to stop reading once you've begun. And in a wordsmith sense it's even more powerful because it's filled with the sort of metaphors you never, ever forget.

Not to mention that it's the very sort of thing my "writing" teacher would condemn and therefore I cannot do anything but fall in love with it. *grins*

Here via underlucius and adding to my memories for re-reading on multitudinous occasions.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much. I'm so very happy it worked for you, given the tense and POV, which are... a hard sell, generally.

Gorgeous, How They Fall.

[bloodrebel333]

Oh, my Lord. You've rendered me marvelling at the beauty of this, the simplicity and complexity and depth.

Re: Gorgeous, How They Fall.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

[spikeyboots]

How to describe this? Writing like this is what keeps me reading. It is dense, it is layered like a quilt passed through generations of hands. The push-pull of the R/S relationship as it exists in a moment and across their lives - it is all invested and woven in this fic.

Beautiful. *memories*

[musesfool]

Wow. Thank you so much. I'm so pleased it worked for you.