** Fic: Seeds of Change ** for aigooism

Dec 01, 2011 07:18

Title: Seeds of Change
Author: delphipsmith
Rating: G
Characters:Draco, Luna and Neville, with cameos by Hermione, Ron, Harry, Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall
Warnings:None.
Summary: Sometimes the lessons you learn aren't what you think
Word Count: 5400
Disclaimer: I don't own them, I just take them out and play with them occasionally.
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

!fic, !2011, character: luna lovegood, character: neville longbottom, character: draco malfoy

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coffee_n_cocoa December 2 2011, 04:29:07 UTC
This was absolutely charming! I loved the interactions between all the characters, and I loved dancing!Neville!

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:43:13 UTC
Heee -- yes, I picture this taking place in the fall, before the Yule Ball, so no one knows yet that he's got this particular talent :) Thanks!

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kellychambliss December 2 2011, 05:02:03 UTC
I really enjoyed this: such a clever premise and execution. (I just wish my own students could remember their reading of Pride and Prejudice as well as Draco does!) You've done such a good job of capturing all the different characters -- they're all just so spot-on, every one of them -- and of tying together your wonderful inventive details. The dancing/flying metaphors works beautifully, too. Just such a fun, fine story; fics like this one are exactly why I like gen.

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:44:17 UTC
Did you already have that icon or did you make it just to comment on this? It's brilliant! P&P is one of my all-time favorite novels and it was such fun to work it into the plot. Thanks for feedback, glad you enjoyed it.

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lyras December 2 2011, 05:53:45 UTC
:D :D I am all smiley after reading this! It's such a great set-up, and you do brilliantly with the interaction between all three students. Lovely!

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:44:44 UTC
Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it :) And I love your icon, it's hilariously adorable :D

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nursedarry December 2 2011, 19:40:26 UTC
I'm so sorry I didn't have the time to beta this, or I could have read it sooner! I love everyone in this, and you've captured Luna to a T. This is so lovely and heartwarming and the inclusion of Draco has a nice poignancy to temper Luna's eccentricity.

Since I know who you are, Mystery Author, you get an appropriate icon.

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:44:57 UTC
Heee. Thanks :)

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mama_pyjama December 3 2011, 00:32:46 UTC
What a fantastic concept, so cleverly executed. I really enjoyed the character development here. Lots of food for thought and this is a story I will be returning to. Thank you.

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:45:40 UTC
So good you could read it again? Yay! Thanks for the kind words :)

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mama_pyjama January 1 2012, 16:18:48 UTC
Absolutely!

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