** Fic: Seeds of Change ** for aigooism

Dec 01, 2011 07:18

Title: Seeds of Change
Author: delphipsmith
Rating: G
Characters:Draco, Luna and Neville, with cameos by Hermione, Ron, Harry, Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall
Warnings:None.
Summary: Sometimes the lessons you learn aren't what you think
Word Count: 5400
Disclaimer: I don't own them, I just take them out and play with them occasionally.
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

!fic, !2011, character: luna lovegood, character: neville longbottom, character: draco malfoy

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aigooism December 1 2011, 07:40:01 UTC
Oh this was a very intriguing premise! Here are the comments I made while reading the fic ( ... )

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:40:06 UTC
Reveals are up so now I can reply, yay, and I'm so very glad you liked it! When I checked your LJ page and saw that you describe yourself as "a very, very picky recipient" I admit to some trepidation :o I really enjoyed creating this as all three characters are ones that I like but don't usually write; it was fun to stretch myself a little. The English lit was a no-brainer since I love P&P and of course it obviously had to go to Draco/Luna, while the classical music request pretty much handed me the Luna/Neville piece. The Neville/Draco one was the last to fall into place (Spouse got really bored with me moaning, "What can Draco possibly teach anyone??" LOL!) but it finally got there. Thanks for the comments and again, so glad you liked it!

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:40:43 UTC
Well when you say "pride" and "prejudice", what else can you think but "Malfoy" LOL? Thanks!

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mollywheezy December 1 2011, 14:12:26 UTC
Great idea for the assignment! I LOLed that Dumbledore was pulling the strings a bit. ;)

All of the pairings and ideas for lessons were brilliant! Neville's teaching Luna to dance was my favorite, but I'm definitely biased since my husband and I ballroom dance. :)

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delphipsmith December 6 2011, 03:27:41 UTC
LOVE your icon :D

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:41:17 UTC
Thanks :)

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bluemermaid December 1 2011, 23:17:29 UTC
This was simply brilliant! Draco's reactions to Mr. Darcy were hilariously spot on, your Luna was wonderful, and Neville's growing confidence was awesome to see. Really masterfully crafted, the characters interact so well together while maintaining their canon personalities. Well done!

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:41:53 UTC
::blushes:: Thanks for the kind words, glad you enjoyed it :)

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agonyatlas December 1 2011, 23:26:16 UTC
I loved this fic!

The characters' progression through the story felt so natural, at no point did the interactions feel forced to go a certain way for the plot. I loved the concept, which was imaginative, and the additions to the background fitted very naturally and didn't stick out too much.

I loved the way each of the three sequences progressed and each fitted very nicely into the overall story. I would say that this was a very well written and well thought out fic, and the humour also added a lot.

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delphipsmith December 31 2011, 19:42:22 UTC
Thanks for the kind words, glad you enjoyed it :)

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