Gift for nocturnus33

Oct 31, 2004 14:38

Gift for: nocturnus33, who wanted a fic that would do justice to Luna. I hope I managed to accomplish that to some extent. Yes, there are undertones of a pairing. Hopefully no one minds; I seem to be horribly allergic to true genfic. :)
Author: scribbling_elf AKA Pandaimonia
Title: "I Do"
Rating: G

I Do )

*scribbling_elf, !2004, ^harry potter/luna lovegood, rating: g, #het

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mchoneygoose October 31 2004, 22:45:40 UTC
Oh! She cares.

Excellent job - great stuff!! ;-)

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scribbling_elf November 2 2004, 00:36:39 UTC
Oh! She cares.

Yes. Or so she tells me. ;-)

Excellent job - great stuff!!
Thank you.

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shadowycat October 31 2004, 22:46:51 UTC
Luna does indeed march to a different drummer. I really like her though, and you've captured her well. :)

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scribbling_elf November 17 2004, 08:08:08 UTC
Um, yes...a very tardy comment. I realized I'd neglected to respond. Sorry!

Luna does indeed march to a different drummer.

That she does. I'm glad you enjoyed it. *smiles* I had a certain person from real life in mind when I wrote this, and that helped me tremendously (before I hit on my real life example, I was quite stuck characterization-wise).

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scatteredlogic October 31 2004, 22:47:34 UTC
This was great! I think you captured Luna very well. And that last line was wonderful. ~applause~

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scribbling_elf November 17 2004, 08:06:37 UTC
I realized I didn't respond to any of my comments before. How rude of me! *mock-slaps self*

This was great! I think you captured Luna very well.

Thank you! It's a relief to know that it turned out well, since I originally found myself in a spot of trouble with her characterization. *blushes at getting praise from the lovely, admirable SL*

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ellie101 October 31 2004, 23:32:19 UTC
I agree: you really captured Luna... I *especially* loved: Luna dances in the corner, her movements sinuous, graceful, but all they notice is that she is out of tune, out of step, out of synch. The faster the music, the slower she sways. You phrased it beautifully!

Wonderful job!

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scribbling_elf November 17 2004, 08:08:53 UTC
In the noble tradition of the shockingly late comment:

Wonderful job!

Thank you. :-) Glad you enjoyed.

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