Halloween Gift for chthonya

[mchoneygoose]

Gift for: chthonya
Author: shadowycat

Rating: G

Comments

[lore]

Wow, I don't think I've ever read Lucius getting marked. The atmosphere of this piece is perfect. Thank you!

love, lore

[shadowycat]

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[chthonya]

Wow, I don't think I've ever read Lucius getting marked.

Ah, well in that case you might be interested in kennahijja's classic To Serve In Hell. It's so good, it almost put me off writing Lucius.

[scatteredlogic]

What a wonderfully creepy atmosphere you've set here!

rows of stone sentinels that marched off into darkness

What wonderful phrasing.

[shadowycat]

She wanted something "atmospheric", so I did my best. :D Thanks.

[chthonya]

You certainly did! I could hear that gate - thank you so much. :)

Interesting to see him observing his unmarked skin, too. Just a hint of thoroughly denied reluctance going on there?

[shadowycat]

I would think that Lucius Malfoy would be a bit reluctant to bow to anyone, and the mark is a mark of servitude in the end. I'm glad you liked it. Happy Halloween!

[missmiah]

A very nice piece, love that it is about Lucius which is a character I don't get to read about very often.

[shadowycat]

Thank you. :D

[ann_mcn]

Ooh -- creepy! Very *shudder* nasty goings on there.

[shadowycat]

Thanks. I was pulling out all the descriptive stops with this one. :D

[shadowycat]

LOL...well, I can understand that, though I doubt if Lucius Mafoy would take advice from a Muggle...even good advice. ;) Thanks.