Comments | hp_halloween: Halloween Gift for Goddessvicky

hphalloween_mod in hp_halloween

Oct 31, 2013 11:10

Gift for: goddessvicky

From: calembours

Title: wings on your feet
Characters: Draco, Ginny
Rating: G
Summary: Don't make bets with professional Quidditch players.
Notes: HAPPY HALLOWEEEEN

( The screech of a cat rips through the silence and both racers take off from the chalked start line in the dirt. )

Comments 14

donnaimmaculata November 1 2013, 20:52:59 UTC

This does have an amazing momentum, a breathtaking ride from start to finish. It truly does feel like a race.

torino10154 November 2 2013, 12:43:38 UTC

Love how fun and competitive they are and the writing makes it feel as if we're flying right along side. Well done!

smallbrownfrog November 4 2013, 18:24:12 UTC

Just reading that is invigorating.

magnetic_pole November 7 2013, 23:18:11 UTC

Fun! Love the completeness of this moment. M.