Comments | hp_halloween: Halloween Gift for Goddessvicky

hphalloween_mod in hp_halloween

Oct 31, 2013 11:10

Gift for: goddessvicky

From: calembours

Title: wings on your feet
Characters: Draco, Ginny
Rating: G
Summary: Don't make bets with professional Quidditch players.
Notes: HAPPY HALLOWEEEEN

( The screech of a cat rips through the silence and both racers take off from the chalked start line in the dirt. )

Comments 14

pauraque October 31 2013, 16:36:35 UTC

Oh, I liked this. Such vivid writing, and I love the dynamic of competition and mutual respect between them.

sdkshelly October 31 2013, 16:50:42 UTC

Oh! This strikes me as so very them. Love your writing here, so evocative with all of the details. Wonderful!

alisanne October 31 2013, 17:32:33 UTC

Mmm, yes. I can totally see them like this. Older and wiser and still very competitive.
The imagery was fabulous here. Well done!

0idontknow0 October 31 2013, 17:51:47 UTC

I love how playful they are with each other.

bluemermaid October 31 2013, 18:18:45 UTC

I love this. I love your turn of phrase, such vivid and colorful descriptions. :)