Fic: Accio Stone

[krisomniac]

Title: Accio Stone
Author: KrisLaughs
Recipient: Sheafrotherdon
Assignment:

(1) James, Sirius, and Remus cannot be evil;
(2) the Potters don't die;
(3) Harry's school years (but focused on the adults, not the kids)
(4) No sexual violence

Summary: This is what might happen if Lily and James Potter had survived Voldemort's final attack, if Harry grew up in a close-knit

Comments

[sheafrotherdon]

I have real, honest to goodness feedback, but first let me just

[krisomniac]

Thank you thank you thankyou! I love the Potters! I even love who Harry could have been

[sheafrotherdon]

The girl that Padfoot and Prongs raised.

[sheafrotherdon]

heeyyyyyy where did the rest of my comment go!? *beats LJ*

So . . . let me try and remember everything I said.

I quoted that part back at you because I love the idea of a girl running around, bearing all the mischievious potential of her father and his best friend. It delights me -- oh dear god, and the very idea of Sirius and James with a little girl . . . rides on shoulders and kicking a football around in the back garden . . .

I love that you have such a feel for the nuances of character -- that you can clearly delineate James and Sirius as best friends without detratcting from the special relationship between Sirius and Remus or between Remus and James.

I also . . . oh, the idea of poor Moony and Padfoot, who've raised Harry for five years, having to move away (even if it is just down the road). My heart!

And I love the Dudley backstory! You should post the deleted scenes in your journal so that we can have more more MORE I say of Daisy Potter and her mother :)

[yenni_babie]

This was rec'ed by sheafrotherdon and I'm SO pleased it was, because I really liked it. I forgot - totally, completely forgot - that this was utter AU. Many AUs where the Potters are still alive make me sad - because it's devastating when it hits you that it can never happen - but this was so entertaining and rich with plot, that I didn't even think of it. Lily obliviating herself was - oh! I can't even describe, except to say utterly perfect.

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition
Thank you for that! I actually used that phrase this evening - scary coincidence - and I love it. Awesome job :)

[krisomniac]

Hehehee. Great phrase. If more people remembered that, the world would be a more lighthearted place.

Thank you! I'mm glad you liked. I only wish it had happened this way...

[surfergirl17]

*points up* she sent me over here, and then said every wonderful thing to be said. this was perfection in an utterey believable and infintely happier timeline.

[krisomniac]

Yeah, you see, if we all put our heads together for the purpose of good, we could make the world such a happy place.

Ah well, in the meanwhile, we can read and write about it. Thank you so much!

[topaz7]

Oh, if only! What a fabulous insight into what could have been. That was wonderful, thank you.

BTW, I thought I knew all the Monty Python skits, but now I've had to look that one up, so, I learned something, too. :o)

[krisomniac]

Heh. That's one of the few I do know. I am woefully lacking in my knowledge of the Flying Circus.

I wish it had happened like this. Thanks for reading through!! (And great icon. He rocks my socks.)

[yeats]

Incredibly done! Omfg.

[krisomniac]

Thanky thanky. I'm so glad that you enjoyed!